Over at the dVerse Poets Pub this evening, Gay has asked us to write Poems about Poetry. I’m presenting one of my older ones for the cause, because I think many who write poetry—and other things—can relate to what I say in it. Enjoy!
Then Snared
Put aside this foolish dreaming
For the past will ever be gone
Dwell not on the things of tomorrow
With its pains, this day goes on
Why, this yoke upon me
I search the heavens and cry
Wishing… it had stayed in shadow
Where proverbial sleeping dogs lie
Had I known what pain was there
My words inside would have stayed
But… wooed by a lover… then snared
Now by same love… I am betrayed
Desire, still hot… within me burns
This love I cannot live without
I must tell the tales and rhyming
From within they scream to be out
Judge me not; turn away then; be still
Should my words say nothing to you
If beat does not beat… nor message convey
I care not… I’ve done what I must do
Copyright © 1998 C. Mashburn
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brian miller said
i have done what i must do…free the captive words…it is a madness at times…and does peel back the scabs with some….i am sometimes afraid of what might happen if i stop…would my head explode like in scanners….or would my heart…
charlesmashburn said
I don’t think I could stop if I wanted to, Brian. It’s who I am.
Thanks!
Claudia said
very felt piece charles and often poetry is just that… a cry of the heart and a vessel to hold the emotions we can’t express otherwise…
charlesmashburn said
I started out writing poetry for Sherry–a definite cry of the heart–and moved on to other topics. I need to get back to writing more for her; she is, after all, my inspiration.
Thanks, Claudia!
Daydreamertoo said
And, don’t you feel so good when those words are finally out, especially the ones filled with painful memories.
charlesmashburn said
Yes, it is always good to get it out.
Thanks, Daydreamertoo!
hedgewitch said
Yes, I can relate to the feeling. Once it’s written, there’s a sense of relief, and often that feeling of being at last done with it is the coolest in the world.
charlesmashburn said
I think most people who write can relate to this feeling.
Thanks!
carolisle said
who snared who?
charlesmashburn said
hmmmm… excellent question!
Thanks, Carolisle!
Heaven (@asweetlust) said
There’s always a risk when we write and put out the words….it may not be meaningful or have value ~
http://a-sweetlust.blogspot.ca/2012/07/like-river.html
charlesmashburn said
Everything we do involves risk, I suppose.
Thanks, Heaven!
mattspotentialpoetry said
And that is why we all struggle against the blank page- against the silence- because we must- a sehr groovy piece. Peace.
charlesmashburn said
So true. Thanks, Matt!
Laurie Kolp said
I’ve done what I must do… so true!
charlesmashburn said
Yes’m. Thanks, Laurie!
Anna Montgomery said
This is very beautiful.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you very much, Anna!
ManicDdaily said
The urgency to be one’s self, to Do one’s work, well-expressed, Charles. You have such great energy and forthrightness.
K. Of course, I have one for this prompt, but the one I did earlier Colonel is one you might like. About a horse. k.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you very much, Karin!
I will read both of yours momentarily!
Ginny at punnypalaver said
Yes–entrapped by poetry–our fate or our destiny?
charlesmashburn said
Actually, this poem having been written several years ago, I have come to think of it as a priveledge!
Thank you, Ginny!
Susan said
A vivid and engaging story. You are forgiven by another who needs forgiveness though I too spurn it.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Susan!
darkangelwrites said
Yep, gotta let it fly!
charlesmashburn said
That’s what I’m talkin bout!
Thank you!
David King said
The truth and sincerity of this carried me with it.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you for the visit and comment, David!
Sherry Mashburn said
Very heartfelt, Charlie.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you!
Bodhirose said
Yes, it matters not what others think about our writings…we must just put down our thoughts.. Truth, Charles.
charlesmashburn said
I agree! Thanks, Rose!
lucychili said
yes sometimes love feels like a silent scream
but perhaps there is a gift here to give
charlesmashburn said
So true!
Thank you, Lucy!
Gay said
The love of words and their anguish all expressed so well here. It is the story of trying to articulate that which has no name, that which before then had no form. When accomplished …such ecstacy!
charlesmashburn said
I so agree!
Thank you very much, Gay!