Then Snared

Over at the dVerse Poets Pub this evening, Gay has asked us to write Poems about Poetry. I’m presenting one of my older ones for the cause, because I think many who write poetry—and other things—can relate to what I say in it. Enjoy!

Then Snared

Put aside this foolish dreaming

For the past will ever be gone

Dwell not on the things of tomorrow

With its pains, this day goes on

 

Why, this yoke upon me

I search the heavens and cry

Wishing… it had stayed in shadow

Where proverbial sleeping dogs lie

 

Had I known what pain was there

My words inside would have stayed

But… wooed by a lover… then snared

Now by same love… I am betrayed

 

Desire, still hot… within me burns

This love I cannot live without

I must tell the tales and rhyming

From within they scream to be out

 

Judge me not; turn away then; be still

Should my words say nothing to you

If beat does not beat… nor message convey

I care not… I’ve done what I must do

 

Copyright © 1998 C. Mashburn

36 Comments »

  1. i have done what i must do…free the captive words…it is a madness at times…and does peel back the scabs with some….i am sometimes afraid of what might happen if i stop…would my head explode like in scanners….or would my heart…

  2. Claudia said

    very felt piece charles and often poetry is just that… a cry of the heart and a vessel to hold the emotions we can’t express otherwise…

    • I started out writing poetry for Sherry–a definite cry of the heart–and moved on to other topics. I need to get back to writing more for her; she is, after all, my inspiration.
      Thanks, Claudia!

  3. And, don’t you feel so good when those words are finally out, especially the ones filled with painful memories. :)

  4. hedgewitch said

    Yes, I can relate to the feeling. Once it’s written, there’s a sense of relief, and often that feeling of being at last done with it is the coolest in the world.

  5. carolisle said

    who snared who?

  6. There’s always a risk when we write and put out the words….it may not be meaningful or have value ~

    http://a-sweetlust.blogspot.ca/2012/07/like-river.html

  7. And that is why we all struggle against the blank page- against the silence- because we must- a sehr groovy piece. Peace.

  8. I’ve done what I must do… so true!

  9. This is very beautiful.

  10. The urgency to be one’s self, to Do one’s work, well-expressed, Charles. You have such great energy and forthrightness.

    K. Of course, I have one for this prompt, but the one I did earlier Colonel is one you might like. About a horse. k.

  11. Yes–entrapped by poetry–our fate or our destiny?

    • Actually, this poem having been written several years ago, I have come to think of it as a priveledge!
      Thank you, Ginny!

  12. Susan said

    A vivid and engaging story. You are forgiven by another who needs forgiveness though I too spurn it.

  13. Yep, gotta let it fly!

  14. David King said

    The truth and sincerity of this carried me with it.

  15. Sherry Mashburn said

    Very heartfelt, Charlie.

  16. Bodhirose said

    Yes, it matters not what others think about our writings…we must just put down our thoughts.. Truth, Charles.

  17. lucychili said

    yes sometimes love feels like a silent scream
    but perhaps there is a gift here to give

  18. Gay said

    The love of words and their anguish all expressed so well here. It is the story of trying to articulate that which has no name, that which before then had no form. When accomplished …such ecstacy!

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