Here’s another one for Sherry to close out our special day. We lived in a small subdivision on Lake Travis for a little over nine years. The time we spent there was wonderful and there were lots of precious moments. This poem describes one of the many special evenings we shared there.
Precious Moments
As we enjoyed a simple supper
At a table beside the lake
The sun seemed somehow anxious
To drop over the horizon
As it slipped behind the hills
The sky glowed a cautious yellow
Then as evening came
Faded to a hazy denim blue
Friends stopped by
Said hellos and sat for a while
Then bade us goodbye and left us
To our quiet little party
As the sky darkened to twilight gray
In the sun’s place there appeared
A lazy crescent moon
Reclining in the western sky
Hands entwined, we talked of tomorrows
As we relished the last moments
Of another perfect summer day
For such precious moments, I am thankful
Copyright © 2011 C. Mashburn
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Pats Devotions said
Thank you Charles; Great article.. Blessings.. Bro Pat.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Bro Pat!
Sherry Mashburn said
This is a wonderful memory, Charlie. And the end of a perfect day heralds the beginning of another perfect day with more precious memories. Thank you for 17 years of precious memories and for future precious memories. I love you.
charlesmashburn said
Love you too!
flipside records said
Love this thought, Charles:
“The sun seemed somehow anxious
To drop over the horizon”
charlesmashburn said
Thank you! That’s exactly how the moment felt.
Mary said
Charles, this sounds perfect really. Friends visiting for a while, then you and Sherry having time to savor moments together as the sun went down on a summer’s eve. Very nice poem.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Mary. We had many wonderful evenings and mornings beside the lake.
brian miller said
first, happy anniversary…that is awesome…and i hope you are both enjoying some special time together….alwyas cherish those simple moments together…
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Brian!
ManicDdaily said
Hi Charles – lovely simplicity here – our poems are not exactly similar, but have certain similar themes – also my anniversary around now! And near a pond and streams. Congrats and lovely poem. k.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Karin!
Susie Clevenger (@wingsobutterfly) said
Sounds like a beautiful and peaceful moment. One of those delicate treasures to help when winter blows cold.
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charlesmashburn said
You HAD to mention winter!
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Thanks, Susie! (No, really, thanks for the comment
Claudia said
lovely..great job on working the atmosphere out…would love to live in a house by the lake…sounds so perfect
charlesmashburn said
It was wonderful living on Lake Travis. We moved away from there about four years ago. We’ll never forget those times.
Thanks, Caudia!
John (@bookdreamer) said
Very evocative
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, John!
Mohana said
Precious, indeed!
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Mohana!
ds said
Happy Anniversary! Lovely memory. Thanks for sharing.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you very much!
zongrik said
every time the summer ends, it seems perfect (but not while we’re dripping sweat and getting dehydrated)
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charlesmashburn said
Thank you!
ordinarylifelessordinary said
Lovely,soothing and intimate.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Vanessa!
pandamoniumcat said
Special moments are wonderful, to dream of tomorrows… lovely!
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Dianne!
catnipoflife said
What wonderful memories expressed in the most loving form – a poem:>)
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Sharla!