This little poem is an offshoot of one I wrote a few days ago called, My Wheels Don’t Turn. One of the pictures in this post is the same one I used in that poem and post, and the other picture is a self-portrait of sorts, which kind of fits the theme of this one. The poem and the self-portrait are a little bit silly, but, with a serious side to them, as well. Enjoy!
No Serviceable Parts
In my front yard
No seat
No pedals
Wheels that don’t turn
Baskets filled with flowers
Well, you and I sometimes resemble
That garden ornament
Because, more often than not
Our unmovable parts and lack
Of certain appurtenances
Shows
But, maybe that’s how we’re made
And even if it’s not
It might be best for others
To let us be
And mind their own business
Not ours
Perhaps consider the label found
On the bottom of many
Household appliances
These days
No serviceable parts
Refer all repairs
To the Maker
… … just sayin
Copyright © 2012 C. Mashburn
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Pat Hatt said
haha yeah many should keep their mind on their own broken down behind. Some parts may not work but then you can say I’m too old for this umm crap with a smirk
charlesmashburn said
That’s what I’m talkin bout, Pat!
Thanks for stopping by! I appreciate the comment!
Elyas Mulu Kiros said
Enjoyed the humor in this piece! 🙂 And the pictures add more flavor to it! 😀
charlesmashburn said
Thanks, Elyus! Good to hear from you, and I appreciate the visit and comment!
aprille said
Can’t get the parts….
Serious and fun at the same time. I’m not really laughing, just a glimmer of a smile.
charlesmashburn said
How come you’re not laughing?? The picture at the bottom should be enough for a laugh!
Thanks for the visit and comment, Aprille!
markwindham said
First of all, points for ‘appurtenances’. Second, very enjoyable read. Amazing how those anti-social neighbors can be such a nosy bunch. 🙂
charlesmashburn said
Ain’t it the truth! They never say boo til they know you ain’t lookin!
Thanks for the visit and comment, Mark!
I appreciate it!
brian miller said
haha nice picture to end on…and no one wants to be fixed you know…that makes you feel more appliance than human….yeah the maker is the best at repairs…smiles.
charlesmashburn said
It’s the best picture of me I could find, Brian! And I definitely ain’t broke & don’t need no fixin. A little fixin up, maybe…
Thanks for the visit and comment!
tashtoo said
OMG! I was still smiling thinking of my last visit and then you hit me with this! Thank you Charles…especially for letting us to enjoy the light that is you. And HUGE gratitude for the smiles 🙂
charlesmashburn said
I love to make folks smile, Tash! That’s what I was made for!
Thanks for stopping by and leaving the great comment!
Timoteo (@Timoteo77) said
No serviceable parts inside…that is precious! (If she’s wearing that sign–I’m out the door, because I’m all about service!)
charlesmashburn said
Haha! I hear that!
Thanks for stopping by and leaving the comment!
ayala said
Fun and a delight 🙂
charlesmashburn said
Thank you! I appreciate the visit and comment!
Sherry Mashburn said
Love it!! Love you!
charlesmashburn said
I’m glad!
pandamoniumcat said
Well said… YES!
charlesmashburn said
Thank you very much, Dianne!
Raivenne said
Gotta love those closing lines. Enjoyed the word play and deeper meaning. Adored the “selfie”.
charlesmashburn said
Yes’m. This is one of those message poems where the last line was the inspiration for the poem. The hook, I suppose.
Thanks for the wonderful comment!
sillyfrogsusan said
I nominated you for an award…I know that you won’t repost it but wanted to offer your link for others. 🙂
http://wp.me/pTYEI-1kr
charlesmashburn said
Thank you very much, Susan! True, I don’t do the award thing, but I certainly appreciate the honor and kind gesture!
jelillie said
Loved that last picture Charles! Thanks! Good truth in a humorous package.
charlesmashburn said
I was hidin from the dog.
And, yes, I like to talk true, but sometimes try to make it lighthearted, as well.
I’m glad you enjoyed the post.
terri0729 said
LOLOL!!!!! Great one Charlie! love the mustache & glasses 🙂
charlesmashburn said
I have to wear to wear those when I answer the phone; bill collectors, ya know
Ginny Brannan said
Yup, exactly what I feel like these days! Great capture, well penned!!
charlesmashburn said
Well, I don’t know if that’s good or bad, but I’m hoping for the good!
I really appreciate the comment!
Rallentanda said
“Blessed are the cracked,for they shall let in light”…Groucho M
charlesmashburn said
Ha! That’s a good one! I don’t recall ever hearing that! I’m gonna put it on FB today!
Thanks for stpping by!