This is something new for me. I don’t often write poems of a religious nature, but as I read today’s “Daily Encouragement”, I saw a poem in it. So if you read the encouragement this morning, this will sound very familiar. You can also listen to me read this one if you’d like to.
Audio version of “Maybe I’ll Shine”. <— click on the title
Maybe I’ll Shine
Have you ever looked at something
Something you’ve seen many times before
And suddenly it looks different
Maybe it’s the way the light hits it
That obviously happens
A table that looked clean the day before
Looks dusty when the morning light streams across it
The light of God’s love shows things as they truly are
I cringe at the thought
Wondering how I must appear
When God’s light shines upon me
But then I ponder God’s love
And the fact that He loved me
Even before I knew Him
And I realize His love is much the same
As the morning light on the table
As it suddenly occurs to me
Things are not as I thought they were
… They’re better
I’m a bit dusty, blemished, and scarred
But like an old chunk of coal
I am being worked and polished
And one day…
Maybe I’ll shine
Copyright © 2012 C. Mashburn
Pictures courtesy of Google Images
Sharing this with dVerse Poets Pub on their Open Link Night ~ Week 57
Audio version of “Maybe I’ll Shine”. <— click on the title
Sherry Mashburn said
AWESOME!
jmdh said
I like it ! if u got some of that polish left over, send some my way!!
charlesmashburn said
I got some! Sendin it yer way, Dale!
catnipoflife said
This is so beautifully written, Charles. We are all God’s children with His hand as our polishing cloth:>)
charlesmashburn said
Thank you very much, Sharla!
brian miller said
oh i am pretty sure you got a good shine on you already…smiles…but yes, we are constantly being worked and i imagine as well in the light that he gives we look a whole lot more beautiful…smiles.
charlesmashburn said
Aw, now, Brian. I’m still pretty dusty and rough, but I’m full of hope!
Thanks!
Jody Lee Collins said
Charles–you’re shining already! this was wonderful.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you very much, Jody Lee!
Pats Devotions said
Shine on my friend, shine on! Great article Charles, Love it.. Blessings.. Bro Pat.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Bro Pat!
Audrey Howitt said
Or maybe we all shine in god’s eyes–lovely write–raises a pensive note in me
charlesmashburn said
Yes, I think we do!
Thanks, Audrey!
ayala said
You shine now 🙂 Nice..we are all a work in progress 🙂
charlesmashburn said
Aw! Thanks, Ayala!
my rays of light said
Aren’t we all just lumps of coal waiting for our moment to shine?
Beautifully written
Peace to you
charlesmashburn said
I beleive you are correct!
Thank you for dropping by!
markwindham said
we do need that polish and shine, that work to be done…but, we are also told it is already done; seen through the Son, we already shine.
Nice work.
charlesmashburn said
I hear ya, Mark!
Thanks!
pandamoniumcat said
I think you’re shining but then l love blemishes, dust and scars they make us who we are, and we can shine just the same! No one is perfect!
charlesmashburn said
You are so right, Dianne!
Thank you!
ordinarylifelessordinary said
I agree with Brian, there’s a good ol’ shine on you there already Mr Mashburn!
charlesmashburn said
I bet you say that to all the old lumps of coal!
Thank you, Vanessa!
Mama Zen said
Marvelous!
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Kelli!
hedgewitch said
Hey, I already have to put my shades on when i come by here, man.
charlesmashburn said
hahahaha! You are too funny!
Thank you!
Heaven (@asweetlust) said
A meaningful share Charles…We would like to shine more brightly as the years go by ~ Happy day to you ~
charlesmashburn said
Thank you very much!
Mary said
The light of God’s love DOES show us as we really are; bur the important thing is…….He loves us anyway! Chunk of coal or not!
charlesmashburn said
Yes, He does!
Thanks, Mary!
Raivenne said
Oh you’ve got that shine on, that is definite. You are not the Candle but one of His many mirrors. Excellent write Charles.
charlesmashburn said
You are too kind, Raivenne.
Thank you!
halfwaybetweenT said
I think you’re already shining.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you very much for the kind words!
Ginny said
By the grace of God, we will shine. This was an encouragement–feeling very dusty today as I raise my voice with my children, expect more than they are capable of, and yet I am loved. More than I know and so are they, thanks be to God. Thank you for this, Charles–
charlesmashburn said
I’m just passing along my own daily lessons. We are all human, and unfortunately we need constant training and forgiveness. If God was a drill sergeant, I’d be deaf from Him screaming in my ear.
yoga-adan said
this was such a great reply to such a nice comment, “If God was a drill sergeant, I’d be deaf from Him screaming in my ear” – i’m gonna cheat a bit and make this my comment on both your poem and comment stream 😉
thanks charles!
charlesmashburn said
Thank you very much, Adan!
Susan said
“And I realize His love is much the same
As the morning light on the table
As it suddenly occurs to me
Things are not as I thought they were
… They’re better. . . ”
I like the dust on the table analogy very much. I too am in the process by being on the path–I leave the product for God.
charlesmashburn said
Amen, Susan!
Thanks!
Raven said
Wonderful self-images!
rmp said
I can see how the light shining on you (or me or anyone) can be intimidating. Seeing our flaws and faults. It’s not always easy to find the good in all of that, but you did. To steal from the movie Aladdin, we’re all “diamonds in the ruff.”
charlesmashburn said
Thank youvery much!