In a story I came across recently, a contest was held for artists, and the subject they were asked to paint was “Peace”. All the artists, except one, painted lovely serene paintings of scenes depicting what we would all agree exemplified the word peace. The one, however, painted a picture of a violent storm accosting a black cliff. The judges were confused. But what none of them had noticed was a small crevice high on the rock wall where a mother eagle braced against the storm protecting her chicks. They all agreed this was true peace; peace that could weather the storm.
A Mother
The day remains dim and shrouded
As the storm rages from off the sea
Waves rise and roar their fury
Then crash against the towering wall
Black stone, smoothed by eons of angry water and wind
In a small crevice, high above the thundering water
Trembling, bracing against the violent gale
A mother eagle shields her young
She waits, ever watching, ever hoping
To see the light at the far edge of the storm
The signal it will soon be over
The chicks—her babes—sleep beneath her wings
Unaware, undisturbed, oblivious to the danger
They dream of one day soaring… in a clear blue sky
Copyright © 2013 C Mashburn
This past Sunday, I posted a poem, Because It’s With Him, which was inspired by fellow blogger, Bro Pat, at Pat’s Devotions. Later that afternoon, when Kelvin at dVerse Poets Pub posted the weekly Poetics feature, I took the easy way out and used the same poem, rudely ignoring his prompt, “Dominant Impression in Artistic Description.” By way of apology, I offer a poem on this evening’s Open Link Night 85 based on one of Kelvin’s artworks.
Sherry Mashburn said
Beautiful and poignant
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, m’dear!
brian miller said
really lovely…and i like the story that you wrote it from as well…it is real peace that can weather the storm and not be tossed about by it…thanks for the wamr thoughts in this…as it storms outside…
charlesmashburn said
Thanks, Brian! I appreciate the kind words!
Truedessa said
Hi,
I really enjoyed this one! There is always something intriguing about your work and I do love eagles or birds of any kind.
charlesmashburn said
Eagles are awesome! Thank you, very much for the nice comment!
ManicDdaily said
Certainly, it is to be wished for! Very nice. k.
charlesmashburn said
Thanks, k!
pandamoniumcat said
Mothers will do all to protect their young…awesome poem Charles, I love where the painting took you, such strong images. 🙂
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Dianne! I’m glad you enjoyed it!
Mary said
I enjoyed this, Charles. I do think that mother eagles must care (almost)as much about their babies as human mothers do. It must be hard for them, especially in a strong storm.
charlesmashburn said
Yes, there seems to be something about eagles and their young.
Thanks, Mary!
ayala said
Lovely capture, Charles. Nice and kind of you to offer an apology to Kelvin. 🙂
charlesmashburn said
Thank you very much, Ayala!
Tony said
Enjoyed reading your work as usual, Charles. Interesting that you chose one picture and wrote about a completely different one!
charlesmashburn said
Thanks for the comment, Tony! My intent was to point out the protectiveness of a mother over her child that I see in Kelvin’s picture, by comparing it to the eagle protecting her young during the storm. Mothers instinctively protect their young.
Tony said
I got the comparison, just found it interesting, that’s all 🙂
charlesmashburn said
Sorry, Tony! I should have known that!
Kelvin S.M. said
…there is always a glimpse of light in your words that deeply inspires… thank you Charles… i’m honored you used my art… no apologies necessary… smiles…
charlesmashburn said
Thank you for the wonderful comment, Kelvin!
catnipoflife said
This one is truly awesome, Charles! Very poignant indeed. I wrote one about the Eagle last year. Check it out when you have time. It is a slideshow and the inspiration came from the last picture of the show. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pgihgod2Vks
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Sharla.
I watched your video and read the poem, but don’t do Google, so I ddin’t leave a comment. I enjoyed it very much though!
catnipoflife said
That’s OK. I am just glad you watched and enjoyed! 🙂
lucychili said
I read this story as a child. In the version I had Solomon asked for a painting of peace and two were finalists. One was a serene landscape, the other was the cliff in the storm. The bird in that story was small and not an eagle. It works either way it is a powerful story. Thank you for making such a descriptive poem of it.
charlesmashburn said
With the Internet, things get changed and passed around in many different forms.
Thank you for the visit and comment, Lucy!
shanyns said
What else is there left to say except I love it? And that for me, that too, is true peace. Well done!
charlesmashburn said
Thank you very much, Shanyns! I’m so glad you like it!