Though it may seem a lie, I am not obsessed with death. It is a season we must too often witness and one day endure, but until it is our earthly end, I believe we should turn away from it, ever marching toward the good light through this dark and sometimes dreary world. My hope is that in the words I share, you will find the light–the light that sorrow often dims. My wish is that I might blaze a trail to help us all find the peace and comfort that is ours should we but receive it. My want is merely to love and be loved as I walk this earth with you.
There Be Silence
Naked she arrives, wailing
A soul, somatic, and helpless
A sylph, merely passing through
Yearning at once to depart
The seamless darkness that is this earth
Tethered against her wishes
Between heaven and hell
Enticed by valueless riches
Yet, giving in to none
Moving each day, one turn closer
Like a howling freight train
Rushing through an underground tunnel
Toward the speck of brightness at its end
And then… there be silence
Copyright © 2013 C Mashburn
This piece was stirred into existence by the wordle challenge of mindlovemisery‘s weekly invitation to write. It was also inspired by the photographic art of Leovi, which is absolutely mind-boggling!
mindlovemisery said
This is fabulous Charles, absolutely fabulous! I can see why Leovi’s work helped inspired this its such a beautiful organic poem =)
charlesmashburn said
Thank you! I’m so glad you like it!
mindlovemisery said
I really did =) Thank you so much for joining the prompt!
charlesmashburn said
🙂
joseph elon lillie said
Beautiful words Charles. I love the imagery of the sylph.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you very much, Joseph. I’m glad you enjoyed it.
Sherry Mashburn said
Wow! Beautifully done.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, my dear!
annell4 said
And WOW! back at you!!!
charlesmashburn said
Ha! Thank you, Annell!
Leovi said
Really awesome to get to that final silence!
charlesmashburn said
Thank you! I’m glad you like it. I enjoyed your artwork very much!
helenvalentina said
Brilliant!!! 🙂 🙂
charlesmashburn said
Brilliant is good! Thank you!!
Robyn said
That silence was powerful!
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Robyn!
Rallentanda said
This is very impressive …the ten words and a perfect match to the
artwork ..Chapeau!
charlesmashburn said
Thank you very much!
charleenm said
This is a very serious piece and well done, but it so reminds me of this picture… http://9gag.com/gag/6884421
Sorry. I had to share.
charlesmashburn said
I love it! I just shared it on FB too!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said
Oh yes that’s the end, and a great fit to the artwork…
charlesmashburn said
Thanks, Bjorn!
Audrey Howitt said
This is a wow–Loved it
charlesmashburn said
Thanks, Audrey! I love them wows!
gsbatty/Old Grizz said
very well done…powerful…mind tingling
charlesmashburn said
Thank you very much!
Talon said
I love the inspiration – very cool photo. And a very intriguing poem to go with it…like the dawn of humanity.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you!
Mary said
Hmmm, the silence at the end is indeed telling.
charlesmashburn said
Thanks, Mary. To be honest, that was kind of unexpected. Just kind of came to me right at the end.
brian miller said
nice…you did really well with this one too charles…love that she ingored what needs ignoring and the allusion to the train ever barreling forward toward that point of light at the end of the tunnel…..
charlesmashburn said
Your insight, as usual, is right on the money. Thanks, Brian!
Penelope Jones said
Silence is in the quiet. 🙂 Great JOB
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charlesmashburn said
Thank you!
Myrna said
Every once in a while, I think I’ve conquered my fear of death. Then a poem like yours comes around and once again I must face the inevitable and recognize that I’m scared, human and seeking light in this dark earth. Your poem acknowledges the darkness and death, yet I felt hope and comfort in reading it.
charlesmashburn said
I’m sorry I caused you to be frightened, but glad you found hope in it too.
Alex Dissing said
The visuals in this one are stunning. Well done, Charles.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you very much, Alex!
Truedessa said
Wow, this is amazing how you were able to weave this poem from the art..the journey to silence.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you very much!
M. J. Joachim said
Peace to you, my friend. Your intro made this piece all the more interesting for me.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you very much!
ayala said
Beautifully penned, Charles.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Ayala!