This one is dedicated to my little brother, Ken. We used to tease him when he’d show up at the tavern after work with his Stanley twenty-five-footer still hooked to his belt. Just about every guy that ever worked construction will relate to this poem. They’ll also know what the following are: Vaughan, Stanley, Skil, and hoser.
When Am I Gonna Learn
It’s hell to put a hardhat on
When you’re sportin’ a category five hangover
Feels too heavy and tight
But wobbly too, like it might fall off
When am I gonna learn
Sure, she was good lookin’, sorta
Hell, by midnight she was a ten!
Two A.M., an SI swimsuit model!
Chatted me up like we were soul mates
Drinking Cuervo shots on my tab
I make one last trip to the men’s room
Come back and she’s gone… hosed again
I bend over and grab a two-by-four
My head feels like it’s full a wet concrete
28 ounce Vaughans goin’ off behind me like cannons
Hook my Stanley, slap the square, zip the pencil
Same measurement, same movements
The Skil screaming like a broke-dick dog
Same ol’ same ol’, every night & every day
Maybe I need to try a new tavern
Copyright © 2013 C Mashburn
Sharing this on dVerse Poets Pub’s Open Link Night ~ Week 83 this afternoon.
Sherry Mashburn said
I don’t think the tavern was your problem 😉
charlesmashburn said
Oh… ah’ight den
Susan L Daniels said
Oh, Charles, this is so vivid. Really enjoyed reading this.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you very much, Susan! I’m glad you enjoyed it!
Laurie Kolp said
Ha… maybe so… or maybe not.
charlesmashburn said
so, your kind of on the fence on the situation?? 🙂
Thanks, Laurie!
bmiller007 (@bmiller007) said
smiles…whole lotta the same going on you know…at work and after….day after day…you brought him to life in this, though i may need a tylenol to get over it…smiles…
charlesmashburn said
The trick is to take 4-5 aspirin before you go to bed.
Thanks, Brian!
ayala said
Charles, this is fun and it made me smile 🙂
charlesmashburn said
Love it when I make em smile. Put it on my tab!
Thanks, Ayala!
Jennifer Adams Teasley said
A fantastic and humorous read! Loved it!
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Jennifer, and welcome to my blog! You are subscriber number 301!
Mary said
Enjoyed the ‘dialect’ you wrote this poem in, Charles. A different style than your usual, I’d say!
charlesmashburn said
I like to get into character now and then, Mary. I’m glad you enjoyed it!
pandamoniumcat said
Cool poem Charles…my husband works in construction, and I met him in a Tavern 🙂 ha ha…
charlesmashburn said
Ah’ight den! Cuervo shots? Haha!
Thanks, Dianne!
Alex Dissing said
I haven’t worked construction but I definitely know how miserable manual labor can be with a hangover. This summed it up perfectly. Humorous, honest… I thoroughly enjoyed this, Charles.
charlesmashburn said
It’s the same, no mater what your doing. It hurts!
Thanks, Alex!
rmp said
this was an entertaining treat. I enjoyed the hard hat stanza. I’m not sure the lesson to learn is switching taverns.
charlesmashburn said
The consensus seems to be that switching taverns is not the answer. On to plan B!
Thanks for the visit and comment!
Ken Higginson said
Ha ha ha…sucker! This is good classic humor. What a con!
charlesmashburn said
Con is correct! It oughta be against the law!
Thanks, Ken!
Tony said
Seems to me he got what he deserved – nothing but a headache 🙂 This reminded me of the song “Cool for Cats,” by Squeeze. An excerpt of the lyrics will tell you why:
“To change the mood a little
I’ve been posing down the pub
On seeing my reflection
I’m looking slightly rough
I fancy this, I fancy that
I wanna be so flash
I give a little muscle
And I spend a little cash
But all I get is bitter and a nasty little rash
And by the time I’m sober
I’ve forgotten what I’ve had
And ev’rybody tells me that it’s cool to be a cat”
charlesmashburn said
Haha! No doubt about it, Tony; this tail has been told many times in many ways!
Sabio Lantz said
Ah, lookin’ for change in a new tavern — ooops..
Well penned.
charlesmashburn said
It didn’t work.
Thanks, Sabio!
hypercryptical said
Lovely construction to a fine tale of the woes of the morning after.
Right tavern maybe – wrong girl certain.
Anna :o]
charlesmashburn said
Now there’s a thought!
Thanks, Anna!
zongrik said
i agree that i’m not sure the lesson to learn is to switch taverns
Initiated Kiss
charlesmashburn said
Seems to be the popular vote.
Thanks, Tammy!
cathymashburn said
I don’t know what those words mean, Charlie. But I can guess. Great poem. Is a tavern exactly the same thing as a bar?
charlesmashburn said
Yes’m. A tavern be the same as a bar. Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment, Cathy!
charlesmashburn said
Reblogged this on Marbles In My Pocket ~ The Official Blog of Charles L. Mashburn ~ Poems, Short Stories, and random thoughts from the author of "Be Still… and know that I am God" and commented:
I think back on these times–a loooong long time ago–and wonder how we did it. Oh, and by the way, this is mostly fiction (for me anyway). I’ll let y’all decide what’s fact and what’s fiction.