Victoria Slotto is hosting a feature for dVerse Poets tonight entitled Meeting the Bar: Heroes and Heroines, and asks us to consider writing a poem in praise of a present-day hero, someone who has made a difference in our own life, or in our own times. I cannot pass up the chance to submit one of my all time favorite poems about my grandpa, Luther “Bunk” Stringer, whose life, in my opinion, was one of historic note, and whose story deserves to be told and remembered. He was the best man I ever knew–by far–and he was my hero. If I am one day considered to be even half the man Bunk Stringer was, I, too, will have had one hell of a ride.
I wrote the following poem shortly after my grandpa’s passing, and it is to his memory I post it once more:
One Hell of a Ride
Come over here and sit for a spell
Lend an ear, I’ll give it a bend
I’ve been known to tell a tale or two
Of things that were, or might have been
With words I’ll paint a picture of days
When I was young and I was lean
Of days I sat tall in the saddle
Long ago when just a teen
I’ll tell of the time I met a girl
Who made me blush and act the fool
The most beautiful girl in Texas
Was no mistake they called her Jewel
I’ll tell you about the sunlit days
Out on the north Texas plains
Where I chased the steers that wandered
‘cross the hot mesquite filled range
I’ll tell of how I sat atop my mount
On a hill as I pondered and dreamed
Dreams of what lay beyond the hills
Far places I’d never been
I’ll tell you ‘bout some of those places
For a bit of traveling I have done
Oh, I wandered from ocean to ocean
In pursuit of that brighter sun
But all roads lead me back here
Now I’ve lost the lust to roam
And so you find me here on this porch
In Texas, my home sweet home
No, I don’t have much to show
For the eighty some years I’ve lived
For I lived hard and I loved hard
I gave this world all I had to give
But cry not when you look upon
The few things I leave behind
My life was full of love and laughter
And I had one hell of a ride
Copyright © 1996 C. Mashburn
siggiofmaine said
I really enjoyed this…thank you. Sometimes reposts are just as fun to read…this is my first read of this poem, but if it is posted again, I’m sure I’ll enjoy it even more.
Thanks.
Peace,
Siggi in Downeast Maine.
charlesmashburn said
Thanks, Siggi! This is the third time I’ve posted it, and probably won’t be the last. One of my favorites, for obvious reasons.
shanyns said
Reminds me of my Grandpa, but his rides were on the Canadian prairies. Wonderful poem, thank you for the repost!
charlesmashburn said
Thank you for the wonderful comment, Shanyn!
cheri said
that was GREAT!! Thank You!-brought water to the eyes!!
charlesmashburn said
I’m glad you liked it, Cheri dear! Nice to hear from you!
Sherry Mashburn said
I was privileged to meet “Pa”, “Bunk” right after I married into the family. He was unable to speak due to a debilitating stroke, but his twinkling eyes spoke volumes. He passed away shortly thereafter. I can testify to the impact he had on Charlie, who I think exemplifies the best that a man can be (just like his Pa!).
charlesmashburn said
Ah, man. Now ya got me all teary eyed. Thanks, hunny!
wolfsrosebud said
nicely written… and your hero is your grandpa… wish I would have known mine… died early in this old life
charlesmashburn said
I can’t even imagine not knowing mine. He was something special.
Thanks for the visit and comment!
Daydreamertoo said
He does sound like he was a good guy. It’s so lovely to have an ordinary every day person to think of as our hero. A lovely tribute Charles.
charlesmashburn said
I think that’s why an ordinary guy is my hero–because I’m an ordinary guy.
Thanks for the visit and comment, Daydreamer!
Kellie Elmore said
I’ll tell of how I sat atop my mount
On a hill as I pondered and dreamed
Dreams of what lay beyond the hills
Far places I’d never been
oh, Charles! your rhyming is just beautiful…flawless and happy. I adore a poet who can do this. unlike myself who, when it comes to rhyme, every word is like “orange”…impossible! Thank you for sharing with me! xox
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Kellie! That is one of my favorite stanzas (which I think rhymes with oranges, if you hold yer mouth just right).
brian miller said
dude…this has a wicked beat…it goes well with devil went down to georgia…ha…and he def sounds like…bet before that stroke he could sure spin some yarns…sounds like a wonderful man…
charlesmashburn said
Thanks a bunch, Brian! And you don’t know the half of it. Bunk could tell stories and jokes for hours, and we would just sit there hanging on his every word. He had this grin when he was telling jokes that just lit up a room. Man, I miss him.
zongrik said
the most beautiful girl in texas is a big big deal!!!
charlesmashburn said
Yes ma’am it sure was. She was a beauty my “Ma”.
Thanks for the visit and comment!
Chazzy Chazz said
Wonderful poem to a man you obviously respect highly, and I see the reason why. We should look up and honor those who toughed out the school of life. It tests us and puts us through trials no book can teach or tell. This is a wisdom that life teaches, and if you hear it you know what is. It’s obvious that the character and honor of this man have affected you greatly, for they come through so clearly and lovingly in your words.
charlesmashburn said
If I could pick a man and say I want to be like him, it was my grandpa.
Thanks for the visit and comment, Charles!
angelique said
Reading this poem was like taking one hell of a ride with you. Thanks for sharing it.
charlesmashburn said
What a great comment, Angelique! Thank you so much!
ManicDdaily said
Hi Charles–I remember this from last time around (which is a good sign with my sieve=like memory.) A lovely poem with such great photos! K.
charlesmashburn said
Thanks for reading and commenting again, K!
Victoria C. Slotto said
Such a fun remembering of a person who clearly touched your life, Charles. Someone I would have enjoyed meeting, for sure.
charlesmashburn said
I’m sure their were some who didn’t like Bunk, but I’m not aware of them.
Thanks for the visit and comment, Victoria!
pandamoniumcat said
I’m sure I’ve read this one before… so lovely to re-visit and a grand tribute. Hoping we all have one hell of a ride!
charlesmashburn said
Thank you very much, Diane! I’m glad you took the time to read it again, and glad you like it!
claudia said
oh wow…he sounds like a man who knew how to live and cherish life’s precious moments…what a beautiful tribute charles..
charlesmashburn said
He did! Thanks for the nice comment, Claudia!
PoetJanstie said
Grandparents can often be heroes, because they are often constant, reliable and teach us stuff.
charlesmashburn said
True. Bunk taught us a lot!
Thanks for the visit and comment!
David King said
You completely won me over with this poem. I was none to sure before I started in on it, but a great, great ride. I’d come again, any day.
charlesmashburn said
Awesome! I appreciate the great comment, David! Do stop by again!
Stuart McPherson said
a very positive message in this. Its all about the journey….not the final destination. Material possessions(stuff), an how much you have accumulated over the years counts for nothing if you haven’t actually LIVED life. Your grandfather sounds like he was a fine man- and you brought him to life with your words.
charlesmashburn said
And that is exactly the point, Stuart. He was a great man, not because he did great things, but because he was awesome in his role as an ordinary man.
Thank you very much for the wonderful comment!
viv blake said
A true hero, he sounds like a lovely man. And your poem is a fitting memorial to him.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Viv! I appreciate the visit and comment very much!
hedgewitch said
That’s the way we all should end our days, and also the way we should hope to be remembered. Enjoyed it much.
charlesmashburn said
I agree! Thanks for the visit and comment!
Susie Clevenger said
we should be able to say it was one hell of a ride…what a wonderful life he lived….love getting a glimpse
charlesmashburn said
I have to say, I can. And, yes, he sure did.
Thanks for the visit and great comment!
nickrolynd said
Wonderful poem. Now that’s a hero. Thanks for sharing. ❤
charlesmashburn said
Thank you!
I appreciate the visit and comment very much!
seingraham said
Nick (and others) beat me to it – when they said, now there’s a hero! I concur … your grandfather sounds like he was quite the guy. Well-written and enjoyed. Thanks Charles.
charlesmashburn said
Yes, I believe he was!
Thanks for the visit and wonderful comment!
elizena said
This was wonderful Charles and so full of the love you so obviously felt for your grandfather. I loved all of it, but…:
‘But cry not when you look upon
The few things I leave behind
My life was full of love and laughter
And I had one hell of a ride
…made me happy and want to cry at the same time. Sadness that such a strong, powerful man was gone, but happy that he’d lived such a full life.
Very well written. Blessings!
charlesmashburn said
Thank you very much, Elizena! He was a wonderful man, and I miss him a lot.
Your comment, as always, is very much appreciated!
David King said
I’m sure I’ve commented on this before, but it seems not to have stuck. I must be not doing something.
I really enjoyed this ride. A fabulous poem. The only disappointment was that it ended! Hearty congratulations.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you very much, David! Your visit and comments are always appreciated!
David King said
Sorry, I’ve just seen it, at the third time of asking! I’m now going back to bed!
charlesmashburn said
No problem, David. I do the same thing. I always blush when I read a response to my comment that says, “Thanks, AGAIN!”