The following poem was inspired by the Robert McCammon novel, The Wolf’s Hour. While the story I tell in my poem is entirely different than the one told in The Wolf’s Hour, I do wish to give credit to Mr. McCammon, and acknowledge his part in its creation.
Doors
The teacher, shoulders sagging, drones on
Something about knowing the world
So we can find our place in it
Saying there are doors to a thousand worlds
And if we listen intently
We can hear the keys turning in the locks
I wonder if they are locking us in… or out
Opening the door… or securing it shut
As she drones on, my mind wanders
To the sound of scrabbling in a dark corner
A rat, in the supply closet perhaps
Or elsewhere, in this huge chamber of the world
I wonder for a dazed moment how I came to be here
Or where, exactly, I am
Returning to the voice in the classroom, I hear her say
It is abhorrent when a man loses control over himself
I only half listen, briefly pondering her words
My attention ever drawn back to the scratching
The scrabbling rat in the dark corner
The center of my existence controlled
By animal instinct and hunger
Hunger that begins to ring in my stomach
Like a hollow bell
Ears hearing, eyes searching
My senses questing for the scratching rat
The hum of the teacher’s voice pulls me again
Beckoning me back to the real world
She promises me that any, and many
Of the thousands of worlds can be mine
If I can stave my hunger, and prepare
For the opening of a door… my door
By making it knowledge I crave
With a snarling grin, I doubt her
For the truth is, in spite of our best laid plans
This life is a walk on the razor’s edge
We speak boldly of the fight within us
Not knowing what it is we will lay down our life for
The woven net of politics?
Some narrow vision of freedom?
Love?
Triumph?
After exploring these question; these things
I find no easy answer
I find only that I am poised on a precipice
Above slavering jaws
Wondering if the ledge upon which I stand
Is truth… or just another lie
Scratching… in a dark corner of my mind
Copyright © 2012 C. Mashburn
Sharing with dVerse Poets Pub on their Open Link Night #56 this afternoon.
catnipoflife said
Outstanding, Charles, and SO thought provoking!
charlesmashburn said
Thank you very much, Sharla! I’m glad you like it!
brian miller said
wonder if they are locking us in… or out
ha, great question….really strong piece man…and the ending is rocks your socks good…in its honesty…it is real or just a lie…because not everyone makes it out alive…
charlesmashburn said
Thanks, Brian! I appreciate the awesome comment!
brian miller said
i cant tell if it actually took my comment…it just disappeared…if it did not take…hit me up cause i really enjoyed the poem sir…
charlesmashburn said
Got it. Thanks!
ordinarylifelessordinary said
I wondered if your name was going to appear on the list and suddenly there you were! This is a deep piece as I read it, lots of questions and doubt within it, and I liked the use of the scratching throughout Charles.
charlesmashburn said
I’m here! I really appreciate that you were looking for me! Appreciate the visit and comment too! And I’m glad you like the poem!
Daydreamertoo said
Ahh… second guessing your own self … I guess (if we believe it) a lie can become our truth. Deep thoughts here Charles.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you!
leahJlynn said
pretty dark, but the light in pick up the fact that when the of achievement is ready to open you can almost hear the key. I liked that statement. Thanks for the inspiration . In truth I’d be more like your M.C, more focus on the rat and the same thoughts on the key.
charlesmashburn said
Thanks for the visit and comment, Leah!
Polly Robinson said
Ah, how many times do we scratch in that dark corner of our mind?
charlesmashburn said
Much too often, I think.
Thanks, Polly!
Sherry Mashburn said
oooh . . . so many thoughts in my mind. Great write, Charlie!
charlesmashburn said
Thank you! I’m glad you like it!
Mary said
Sometimes one must take the lessons of those who teach with a ‘grain of salt.’ Answers aren’t always all that easy!
charlesmashburn said
Very true, Mary!
Thank you!
Annette Mickelson said
I love the way you contrast that sounds of the rat with the teacher/prof. My brain would be in the closet looking for that rat too — or thinking about lunch.
charlesmashburn said
I hear ya!
Thanks for the comment!
Gay Reiser Cannon said
Excellent postulations in the poetic mode – the scuttling rat the metaphor for short attention spans and endless din in a world of lies. Yet decisions ever have to be made and with each “door” we pass through, we necessarily curtail our freedom – as individuals surely, and as a nation possibly as well. Well said.
charlesmashburn said
Hey! You cain’t say “postulations” in here!
That was how McCammon used the scuttling rat in The Wolf’s Hour–attention span.
Thanks for the great comment, Gay!
Ginny Brannan said
“For the truth is, in spite of our best laid plans
This life is a walk on the razor’s edge”
Some really good ponderings here. Well captured.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you very much, Ginny!
I appreciate your visit and comment!
Susan said
Really felt this in my “corner”. Outstanding …you are an inspiration, sir.
charlesmashburn said
Wow! Thanks, Susan!
pandamoniumcat said
Terrific stuff, that last stanza really hits. How do we know anymore. The freedoms, the truths are all hazy, we do sit silent in that dark corner scratching about for what we once were, or for what we were once taught…that in this day and age seems to have disappeared along with the truth. The doors are difficult to pry open these days, I suspect we need to scratch a little harder and dare to look beyond… Great poem Charles… rings true to what’s going on politically in my part of the world.
charlesmashburn said
Sounds like we live in the same kind of world, Dianne. You’re definitely singing my song.
Thanks for the awesome comment!
Raivenne said
Oh Charles, you’ve woven the tapestry of most of my high school thinking here. We are taught to question everything, but only ask that for which they already have answers for. Few of which opens the doors to that for which we search. I still feel like a rat scratching at the doors of knowledge.
charlesmashburn said
I’m learning all the time. I often wish I’d been this eager to learn when I was in school!
Thanks, Raivenne!