Here’s another of my many “wolf” poems. I wrote a slew of them in the late nineties, and seems I keep finding more as I go through all my old files. As I’ve said before, I have always been fascinated by wolves; I find them to be an extremely romantic animal, and to me they epitomize the struggle of life.
I will be posting this poem on Gooseberry Garden’s Poetry Picnic. Their theme this week is Nature, Forests, Rivers and Mountains, and, though I don’t mention them all, I think this poem is on the right track for the prompt. I hope you enjoy it.
The Wolf and the Rose
Lone white wolf on the hillside
Gazing down, he stands silent and still
Hungry eyes scan the valley
Searching for this night’s kill
The moon still fast asleep
On the cold world’s other side
Snow shawl wraps the mountain
‘cross the valley, so deep and wide
Wolf moves as if by magic
Slips quietly down the hill
Belly empty and aching
Demanding to be filled
Eyes roaming as he travels
He blends with the blanket of snow
Nothing else moves, no sign of life
Not a bush or a flower grows
Alas, he grows weak then stumbles
Another step and then he goes down
A groaning last breath escapes him
The cold world hears not the sound
His body lies stiff and frozen
Until at last comes the spring
Tis in the summer they find him
‘neath a tree where songbirds sing
A thorny bush with one red blossom
Casts shade on the spot where he fell
The birds warble a song bittersweet
A story of life in the wild they tell
They sing not a song of his death
Of his dying, his struggles and woes
They sing about life lived hard, yet full
For the wolf that lies ‘neath the rose
Copyright © 1999 C. Mashburn
cheri said
i loved it:)
charlesmashburn said
I knew you would!
Thank you!
Morning said
a sad death for the wolf,
a rose will make the place more graceful, apt mixture of loss and love.
Happy Poetry Picnic.
😉
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Morning! Your comments are always appreciated!
Heaven said
And hopefully we look at death and life this way. This line resonate with me:
“They sing about life lived hard, yet full”
Uplifting write ~
charlesmashburn said
You saw through to the core of this one, Heaven!
Thank you for the wonderful comments!
The Orange Tree said
a song of life lived hard, yet full …
divine line, well done.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you! That is the heart of this one!
thingy said
Oh, beautiful, yet made me sad.
charlesmashburn said
Yes, that is exactly what I was shooting for with this one; the beauty and sadness that are life.
Thank you!
swanrose said
great ending to this.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Swanrose!
terri0729 said
Ooh Charlie! I really liked this one probably the best so far! It is simply beautiful and beautifully simple. Peace, love and blessings, Terri
charlesmashburn said
The best so far? Wow! I hope you’re right, Terri! But then… I’d have to write a better one!
Thanks for the awesome comments!
David (1MereMortal) said
Enchanting write…most enjoyable.
charlesmashburn said
Thanks, David! I appreciate it!
A.B. Thomas said
Struggle, the undeniable strength of fate and the reenergization from the loss – great write! By the by, I enjoyed reading the write up on how your blog and the little snippets of how you go about things!
charlesmashburn said
Thanks, A.B.! I like to let folks know where my writing comes from. It has a lot to do with things, I think. People like to see inside of things.
Thanks for the great comments!
Daydreamertoo said
Awww I love most animals, can’t say I’m too fond of snakes or creepy crawly bugs that bite but, don’t wish harm on them. Apart from Mosquito’s and those things that bite like that. I feel so bad/sad for the poor wolf. I think wolves have such a mystique and majesty about them, they have been hunted (almost to extinction) so badly maligned by us.
It breaks my heart when we see of bears and other wildlife being shot because they encroach/poach for food in towns, as I tell my teen, humans are taking away so much of their habitat and their own hunting grounds they have no choice but to search where humans are.
Ok, better step down off soap box… LOL
Very nice write from you (still sad for the wolf though ) *winks.
charlesmashburn said
You are preaching to the choir, Daydreamer!
Thanks for the beautiful sermon!
Anthony F. Rando said
Beautifully done!
charlesmashburn said
Thank you for the visit and comment, Andy!
Sherry Mashburn said
Beautiful write of life’s haunting beauty . . .
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Hunny!
halfwaybetweenthegutter said
Another great write 🙂 I’ve always thought wolves are the most beautiful creatures; I think it’s why I hanker after a large dog of my own.
charlesmashburn said
That’s kind of the opposite for me. I would never own a large dog, unless I had a big piece of property it could run on. I’m funny that way.
Thanks for the great comments!
halfwaybetweenthegutter said
That’s the reason why I don’t have one, I’d have to live on a farm or estate. I hate the idea of keeping animals from running around and being themselves.
charlesmashburn said
I hear ya! Until my little dog got old and can’t run much, I used to take her out to run every day. She’s sixteen, and we still go for two walks a day. She also has her doggie door and a big yard she can roll around in. Thanks for the conversation. I love dogs!
Andy said
Hello Charles.
There is such depth of emotion contained within.
A well-written piece of life, its struggles & of course ending with death.
I love the beauty of the one red blossom.
The last two stanzas sealed it for me.
Nicely penned, my friend.
Thanks for sharing & for your visit/comment. They are always appreciated.
The Quiet Winds Of The Night
charlesmashburn said
Thank you for the thought-filled comments, Andy!
Your visits and comments are always appreciated!
ghosterb said
Nicely done Charles. This was a very entertaining read my friend!
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Bruce. I appreciate the comments!
becca givens said
Enchanting, sad and beautiful … leaving the reader lifted with inspiration!
They sing not a song of his death
Of his dying, his struggles and woes
They sing about life lived hard, yet full …
Thank you!
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Becca, for the nice comments!
Eclipse said
A well written poem Charles, a great metaphor for life vs death…
Poor wolf…I’ve always feel for his kind…..(…howwl….)
charlesmashburn said
Thank you very much, Lenore! I appreciate the comments!
Fountains said
The last paragraph! How inspirational.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you! I’m glad you like it!
robin said
amazing imagery… i read it as the wolf within..
charlesmashburn said
Thank you for the nice comments, Robin!
William Leed said
This poem has a really nice flow. It has good imagery. The wolf is one of my favourite animals. It was real.
William
charlesmashburn said
Thanks for the great comments!
Seabell said
So sad and beautiful! A truly song to the wilderness.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you for the great comments, Seabell!
Kay Salady said
That was really nice, Charles. I liked the part about one rose growing on the bush. xoXox
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Kay! Your comments are very much appreciated!
dc said
I love a good wolf poem – http://dunstancarter.wordpress.com/2008/10/10/the-wolves/
charlesmashburn said
Good! Thanks for the visit and comment, Dunstan!
C.L. Sostarich said
Living hard, yet full….great food for thought. I loved the imagery and sound of “The moon still fast asleep/On the cold world’s other side/Snow shawl wraps the mountain/‘cross the valley, so deep and wide”
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Carly. I appreciate the wonderful comments!
Elyas Mulu Kiros said
Woohoo I smell Halloween here!! lol Great piece Charles!! Thank you for sharing!
charlesmashburn said
I have a Halloween poem ready to go, Elyas. It’s a bit on the light-hearted side of things, however. I’ll post it tomorrow or the next day.
Thanks for the comments!
Classic NYer said
Wow. This feels really powerful.
charlesmashburn said
Thanks! I appreciate the comment!
Inside the Mind of Isadora said
Poignant and moving both in its’ gentle gentle expression of a heartbreaking death and in its touching hope for the renewal of life.
Very deep … a … must read agan poem.
Blessings,
Isadora
charlesmashburn said
Thank you very much, Isadora!
Darryl Davis said
A pittoresque piece 🙂
charlesmashburn said
Thanks for the visit and comment, Darryl!
Abby Kelly said
I love it, but it makes me sad ):
http://www.benjity.wordpress.com
charlesmashburn said
Yes, sometimes life is sad, but most of the time it is full of joy!
Thanks for the comments, Abby!
Becky said
Yay Charles! Such great images. Loved this.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Becky!
I’m glad you like it!
disjointedrhymings said
Absolutely beautiful
charlesmashburn said
Thank you!
C Rose said
The wolf such a symbolic and even spiritual creature, you serve its image well in your words. Lovely ~ Rose
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Rose!
lolamouse said
Strong piece! Sad yet speaks truth of the circle of life. Great images in this poem.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Lola!
jeannette said
life is short and must be lived full and hard….
thank you for taking time to read one of my posts recently. i’m learning from all you..
happy weekend! God bless you!
charlesmashburn said
Thank you very much, Jeannette!
naramalone said
I’m here reading your wolf poems. Thanks for pointing me to them. Maybe you’d like to share a series in a guest post at Therianverse.com
charlesmashburn said
I’d love to, Nara. Which do you think would be best, “Changed”, or a group of the others?
Polly Robinson said
Most unexpected … I see what you mean that you ‘write about them in a more romantic vein’ … mine are, as you say, ‘wicked’ 🙂
charlesmashburn said
I’ve got some wicked stuff in my satchel, but as you can see, I’m more the romantic. I just mix in a little drama.