This is another of my poems written in 1998. It too has a story with the same name. The story was originally titled “Dust To Dust”, and was the first story I wrote when I began writing in 1995. I had wanted to write since high school, but felt I did not have the education to do it. Sherry told me if I would write, she would edit, and so here we are, thirteen years later. She still edits everything I write, and I couldn’t do this without her.
This poem is also being posted on Gooseberry Garden’s week #3 Poetry Picnic
Blood On The Moon
Tears are streaming down my face
I see blood on the moon
Riders race across the sky
Is Jesus coming soon
People vanish all around me
Gone in the blink of an eye
Thunder crashes, mountains crumble
Day turns dark as night
Cool wind blows across my face
Bittersweet kiss from the groom
My mind screams fear, I tremble
Run and hide in my room
Scarred hands reach to find me
In the dust beneath my bed
He says, “Come with me, child
For we’ve already been wed”
He takes me to the sky with Him
I feel weak, I begin to swoon
I awake from the dream…. Screaming
Out my window…. I see blood on the moon
Copyright © 1998 C. Mashburn
Life: Between the lines said
This reads like the first resurrection, happy day for some, scary for most
Happy gooseberry day!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/09/04/as-it-was/
charlesmashburn said
I agree! I plan to be in the first group!
Thanks for the visit and comment!
morning said
folks come and go,
stunning life with some haunting glow..
what a show, thanks for sharing.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you for the wonderful comment!
Rekha said
Gave me goosebumps. The final day when mankind perishes…maybe make way for a better, orderly bunch.
charlesmashburn said
It’s only fitting you should get goosebumps at a Gooseberry picnic!
Thanks for the visit and great comments, Rekha!
swanrose said
a very powerful piece… wonderful job
charlesmashburn said
Thanks a bunch! Appreciate the visit and comment!
fiveloaf said
nice! here’s my entry charles: http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2011/08/30/a-roar-to-mankind/
charlesmashburn said
Thanks for the comment!
Ann LeFlore said
I love your site and all of your poem. They are so inspiring and I love when you share. Happy gooseberry days
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/04/haggle-baggily/
charlesmashburn said
Thank you very much, Ann!
I’m glad you enjoy my blog and writing!
Ina said
A poem with a message to think about!
charlesmashburn said
Indeed it is, Ina.
Thanks for the visit and comment!
Liliana Negoi said
eish – this gave me goosebumps…beginning and ending with the same “blood on the moon”…i remember i saw a red full moon a couple of weeks ago – it was really scary indeed…
charlesmashburn said
I must’ve done good if it gave you goosebumps!
Thanks for the visit and great comments!
David (1MereMortal) said
A powerful write…left me with much too think about. Excellent poem.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, David. I figure if a poem makes people ponder, I’ve done something worthwhile. I appreciate your visit and comment very much!
terri0729 said
Marvelous! Very well done, Charles!! I loved it. God Bless…
p.s. That’s cool that you used you mother’s picture too!
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Terri! Your visits and comments are always wonderful!
tigerbrite said
Sounds like the fall of Atlantis. Very spooky, the Moon Goddess was obviously angry..
charlesmashburn said
Yes’m, I would say so!
Thanks for the visit and comments!
Always appreciated!
cinnamon blues said
A powerful piece, very moving.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you! I appreciate your visit and comments!
pure2core said
only you can give this poetry a haunting tint…superb write… felt as if I saw it in front of me..gr8!
charlesmashburn said
Thank you for the awesome comments/compliments! I appreciate them very much!
zongrik said
blood on the moon is sure different than the big bright light.
charlesmashburn said
I’m going to have to agree!
Thanks for the read and comment!
Hope said
wow! intense! wonderful read!
thank you for your visit!
charlesmashburn said
You’re welcome, and thank you!
Wonderful comments!
ghosterb said
This gave me the chills my friend, Awesome write!
charlesmashburn said
Thanks! I appreciate the great comments!
Sherry Mashburn said
Haunting and terrifying . . .
charlesmashburn said
As it should be…
Manoj Kewalramani said
hmmmmm very, very interesting. Two themes that struck me: 1) the cyclical nature of life, i.e., despite the biggest of events, things return to, or remain, the way they were in many ways. 2) The nature of reality itself; in the sense that what’s real and how do you define that.
Let me know if any of that was on your mind when you wrote 🙂
charlesmashburn said
The surreal was definitely in the mix. In a situation wwhere all is gone and yet I remain… am I really there?
Donna Swanson said
Beautiful. How often fear is mixed with joy as we contemplate that day. A nephew and two dear friends are fighting cancer right now. My heart is almost too heavy to write.
charlesmashburn said
I’m so sorry to hear that about your nephew and friends, Donna. My prayers and hopes to you!
David Rheins said
Riders on the Storm!
charlesmashburn said
Good background music for this if it were a movie scene.
Thanks for the visit, David!
Seabell said
Curious episode, so nicely told!
charlesmashburn said
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liv2write2day said
Nicely written, Charles. I like to think of His coming everyday…in many ways. Too often, I’m afraid, I’m too busy or worried to notice.
charlesmashburn said
Don’t get TOO busy! Only takes a thought now and then to stay close!
A.B. Thomas said
There’s something comforting yet disturbing at the same time – very cool
charlesmashburn said
I know exactly what you’re saying, A.B.!
Thanks for the comments!
blitzken said
Wow, sounds like my first wedding! 😉
charlesmashburn said
Hahaha! That’s funny stuff, Kenny! Love it!
blitzken said
No no, wait, my second wedding. Oh dang I get them mixed up. 😉
charlesmashburn said
It’s all about the choices we make, my man.
Thanks for the comments and laughs!
Sherrie Theriault said
Seems you have been dreaming my nightmares. I am sorry that you have but thankful that you write about them!
charlesmashburn said
I hope you don’t have that nightmare often, Sherrie!
Thanks for the visit and comment!
Emmanuel Ibok said
This is fantastic poetry. The title was superb. Well done.
Cheers!
charlesmashburn said
Thanks for the awesome compliment/comment, Emmanual! I certainly do appreciate them!
mairmusic said
Oooo, creepy, scary– you should have saved it for Halloween (:
charlesmashburn said
Oh, no. I have a special one I’m saving for haloween!
Thanks for the visit and comment!
Anna Montgomery said
I just heard an NPR story on a book about the rapture (which is what this made me think about), I’m glad you decided to write. It’s important to share your gift with the world. Appreciate your wife editing too, great partnership.
charlesmashburn said
Thanks, Anna! Your visits and comments are always appreciated.
I liked your poem! Kodachrome, I think it was? Made me think of an old Simon and Garfunkel tune.
Rosie said
That is really thrilling! How did you get that inspiration? I enjoyed that read.
Rosie
charlesmashburn said
Actually, Rosie, the poem was a result of the short story by the same name. I just started writing, and the story took on a life of its own.
Thanks for the visit and comments!
CC Champagne said
It’s always nice to be saved, and I love the blood on the moon imagery! Once again a great poem, Charles!
charlesmashburn said
Thank you for the visit and great comments, CC!
Baishali said
a powerful moving write. very different.
charlesmashburn said
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manicddaily said
Very dramatic!
charlesmashburn said
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chimnese said
poetry with a spiritual meaning is my fave..good thought provoking visions..
charlesmashburn said
Thanks, Chim! I’m glad you enjoyed it!
bendedspoon said
heart pounding! you are a powerful writer 🙂
charlesmashburn said
I’m so glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the wonderful comment!
Dave said
A well written eerie poem.
Thanks.
charlesmashburn said
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Mike said
A powerful poem and a great read.
charlesmashburn said
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manueland said
Seems to me that the power of the imagination is so ‘real’ that can change ‘reality’ even though, Reality is Wonderful.
I enjoyed reading your emotions Charles
Thanks for your visit to my virtual home
charlesmashburn said
Very true, Manuel. Thanks for the visit and comments. Much appreciated.
elainedanforth said
Charles,
I just wanted to peek at this before I went out, dawdling as I was, and thinking I’d probably enjoy what you might happen to be serving up. Perhaps by now I should be forewarned that you work may take me deeper than mere enjoyment at times.
This did. I am moved, and taken off guard, because if someone had described to me what this poem is about, I would not have expected to enter into its world so readily.
I’m not sure whether you meant this, but it seems the speaker of the poem is afraid he is Judas, but apparently Jesus does not think so.
Startlingly good job on this.
And another loving, gracious tip of your hat to your wife’s role in your life, in the intro. That is always beautiful to see.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you for these wonderful comments and compliments, Elaine! (I’m sure Sherry thanks you, too.)
As for the meaning, I was going more for the line of thought that the person was afraid they had not lived a life worthy of the savior’s rescue.
tasithoughts said
Your spiritual desire rings clearly through the images here. It follows a universal longing of mankind to find purpose and also to be one with their creator. Well done.
JP
charlesmashburn said
Thank you for the insightful comments. I appreciate them very much!
Nanda said
Beautifully sad!
Well done.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you very much for the visit and comment!
snailsweat said
As terifieing the notion of going with a stranger to the sky is, part of me would want to go curiously enough. do you feel the same way?
charlesmashburn said
In this scenario, I would definitely go.
Thanks for the visit and comment!
snailsweat said
not a problem thanks for the post, and thanks for checking my page out, im just getting started on my blog so every bit of encouragement helps!
charlesmashburn said
I’ll keep an eye out for more from you. That’s my job; encouraging folks!
Stef Gonzaga said
This is such a powerful poem, thank you for sharing it! If this was me, I’d probably be cowering in my room too, wondering if I’m really worthy of Jesus’ welcome and invitation to join him.
charlesmashburn said
That’s kind of where I was coming form on this one, Stef.
Thanks for the visit and great comment!
Danielle Mari said
Interesting choice to break the rhythm in the final stanza!
charlesmashburn said
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Jamie Dedes said
A timely topic and one that many will relate to.
charlesmashburn said
Thanks for the visit and insightful comment, Jamie!
Bodhirose said
So powerful, Charles. I don’t think you have anything to worry about!
charlesmashburn said
Thank you for the kind comment!
Christopher Raley said
Parts remind me of a Michael Omartian song coupled with a childhood nightmare I can still recall.
charlesmashburn said
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The Oldstrong said
Yet another brilliant and powerful piece! Made me think of somebody (a child maybe) having troubling thoughts / dreams after reading the Book of Revelations.
The riders being the Four Horsemen of the Apocalypse, people vanishing as in the Rapture and possibly the scarred hands (representing is crucifixion) belong to Jesus “come with me child, for we’ve already been wed” possibly meaning that the child has already been saved.
This is just my take on it, but either way an AWESOME piece.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you so much for these awesome comments and compliments. And, you are right on with your analysis of the poem.
Kay Salady said
I really like this poem, Charles. It reminds me of one of my favorite songs. Listen to this:
http://video.search.yahoo.com/video/play?fr2=piv-web&p=ride+jesus+ride+song&vid=1016948392226&dt=1260750215&l=335&turl=http%3A%2F%2Fts3.mm.bing.net%2Fvideos%2Fthumbnail.aspx%3Fq%3D1016948392226%26id%3D7192f5134d9110b3285f54eb1a6e47b0%26bid%3D7yJ1Mxc0mhBWQg%26bn%3DThumb%26url%3Dhttp%253a%252f%252fblip.tv%252ffile%252f2969219&rurl=http%3A%2F%2Fblip.tv%2Ffile%2F2969219&tit=RIDE&sigr=10rqm2hc2&newfp=1
charlesmashburn said
What a perfect fit! I love the song, and it does fit the poem quite well! Thanks for sharing it with me, Kay. Have a wonderful day!
veronicadimarco said
Beautiful! very nicely done! I opt to be ready when that time comes… “no turning back now”….
Thank you for dropping by on my page too… 🙂
charlesmashburn said
Me too! Thanks for the visit and comment!
And, you are very welcome for the vissit to your page.
The Cello Strings said
you have captured the dying moment precisely and in a spiritual way,
yes, Jesus is there,
bless you.
well done entry.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed this!
I appreciate the visit and comment!
bridget otoole said
wow… beautiful… where can i buy your book? i would love to hear more of your work!
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Bridget! I assume you are asking about my book, Be Still. Several links to purchase all my books can be found on the right side of my blog. You can read lots of my poems, stories, and encouragements right here on the blog, as well.
I appreciate your visit, comments and interest.
Parth Joshi said
loved the story…:-)… there is that earnestness but with the same time traces of that cloaked abstract…
charlesmashburn said
Thanks for the read and comment! Very much appreciated!
Kate Snape said
I love it! It sent chills down my spine! It has an eerie feel to it and I particularly like the last line of the first verse “Is Jesus coming soon” Thanks for the read!
charlesmashburn said
I’m glad you enjoyed it, Kate! The stroy is even more eerie. Taks a look at it if you have time.
You are welcome for the read, and thank you for the visit and great comments!
edpilolla said
what a dark, seductive ride. you’ve woven a story in here from a moment of reacting to the strange moon, and it is delicious. this has so much rhythm it almost reads like a chant, and though it’s not, truly, it is enchanting.
charlesmashburn said
Thanks for the great comments!
anjum wasim dar said
It takes great courage and faith to write such thoughts.true that Jesus will come and soon.There are signs and visions .Great poem.
charlesmashburn said
Thanks very much for the kind comments!
Leonargo said
This sounds like experiencing a dead visitor, and the dust, but in the end you are flying. Perhaps it is true that the moons have an amazing unseen effect on life.
A truely powerful piece, thank you.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you for the visit and comments!
Elyas Mulu Kiros said
Interesting 🙂 …
Old Raven said
Wow! This is extraordinary! Through the fears and the chaos … appears to be a sense of comfort and an eye to the future. You have created something very vivid. I like it.
charlesmashburn said
Thanks! I love them “wows”! I appreciate the wonderful comments, too!
Mr. Watson said
Amazing write Charles…. !
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Mr. Watson! Your comments are appreciated!
tigercity said
On first reading I thought the poem was about the Colombia space shuttle disaster in the 80s.. maybe a sight a child had observed then rushed inside, emotionally scarred.. but you’re describing the doomsday.. the ultimate day on earth.. Blood on the Moon is a wonderful, powerful title..
charlesmashburn said
Oh. I can see where you might have thought that. First it’s been said, but not a stretch at all.
Thanks for the great comments!
Susie Clevenger said
The future has such questions and fears…your poem offers comfort…good job
charlesmashburn said
I’m glad you can find comfort in it.
Thanks for the visit and comments!
Paige said
very pretty. I like your word choice.
charlesmashburn said
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Abby Kelly said
This is wonderful -makes me so anxious for that day!
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charlesmashburn said
Awesome! Thanks for the visit and wonderful comment, Abby!