I don’t think this poem got any reads last time around. Dockers is pretty upset about it. So, I’m gonna give y’all another chance. C’mon, give the old dog her 15 minutes!
DANG!
Dang! I said, as I stepped in the pile
My dog had left on the lawn
I looked all around for that little mutt
But alas, the scoundrel was gone
Said some choice words, sat down in the yard
And proceeded to clean my shoe
There she was peeking ‘round the corner
With a look that said, I showed you
I couldn’t believe the gall of that dog
I jumped up and gave her a chase
Her eyes got real big and away she did run
I was slow, wasn’t much of a race
Hadn’t made it half way ‘round the house
When she passed me like I wasn’t moving
Looked up at me with a big doggy grin
Not bad ol’ dude, you’re improving
I thought to myself, I’ll teach her a lesson
So, I stopped and hid out by a bush
Who do you think was the one got surprised
She doubled back, gave a nip on my tush
I hollered and jumped, shoved my head in the shrub
Then turned on the ornery beast
I saw in her face a joy so intense
Just afore she took off to the east
DANG! I repeated, but stayed by the bush
I knew to give chase would be futile
‘Sides, I was thinking as I rubbed on my bum
She don’t bark, but her bite is brutal
And so I vowed as the dog ran afar
To remember this painful lesson
From now on when I walk in the yard
I’ll be careful where I’m a steppin’
Copyright © 1998 C. Mashburn
Sharing this poem with The Purple Treehouse for their Funny Bunny Friday #5
Sherry Mashburn said
Ha! I can see her doing that when she was younger (don’t let her know I said that!). Funny, funny! Great rhythm, too.
charlesmashburn said
Thank ya, thank ya! Couldn’t a done it without that dang dog!
paulo guimaraes said
Hahahaha, gotta watch for.those little.presents,lol!
charlesmashburn said
Yes we do! Thanks for the visit and comment, Paulo!
terri0729 said
Ya’ gotta love them dogs, especially the smart ones, lol! Good story Charlie!! Blessings, Terri
charlesmashburn said
If ya knew this dog, it would be even funnier. She’s a character!
Thanks for the comments, Terri!
Morning said
amazing imagery with you stepping into a dog’s pile, what a cool entry.
charlesmashburn said
Thanks for the comment, Morning!
siggiofmaine said
Enjoyed this post a lot…thanks for bringing a smile to my face.
Peace,
Siggi in Downeast Maine
charlesmashburn said
Glad I could make you smile, Siggie!
Tilly Bud said
That gave me a real laugh out loud moment. Love it!
charlesmashburn said
I love it when I can make folks laugh out loud! Thanks for the great comment!
Larry Meredith said
Dang, I thought, he’s taking a real risk sitting down on that very lawn. If you must watch your step, you best also watch your sit. Enjoyed the poem.
Larry
charlesmashburn said
Oh! Never even thought of that, Larry! Thanks for the good advice! And thanks for the visit and comment, too!
Charlie Parant said
even worse with a new puppy and the landmines are inside the house…thanks for sharing this one,Charles
charlesmashburn said
Yep! You got to be careful inside and out!
Thanks for the comment, Charlie!
tinkwelborn said
Ha! Indeed! I am so accustomed to this…I have two dogs. Even walking them around the block (for exercise & to mess elsewhere — Oh, I pick it up), I inevitably step in other people’s dog messes (which they don’t pick up).
funny poem. thanks for sharing. my two dogs love it.
charlesmashburn said
Glad you and the dogs enjoyed it, Tink!
Bodhirose said
Dang that was cute! Enjoyed that from start to finish, Charles.
I don’t have that problem with my cat…
charlesmashburn said
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!
Becky said
Now how can I pass up a dog blog??? 😉
charlesmashburn said
You cain’t do it, Becky!
And I’m glad you didn’t!
emanita01 said
This is a fun one, thanks ;-D
charlesmashburn said
Thank you fr the comment, Emanita!
Jess P said
So cute! Thanks for sharing that with me.
charlesmashburn said
You’re quite welcome, Jess! Thank you for the visit and comment!
Suzy said
lol that was fun to read – could picture it all too. thanks for visiting my blog.
charlesmashburn said
I’m glad you enjoyed it, Suzy!
The Cello Strings said
great poetry with accentual humor fully packed in it,
well done.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you very much!
Bijaylaxmi Sarangi said
Love it.. lol, real fun would be to chase your dog..
charlesmashburn said
Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the visit and comment!