This is part three of the four part series of poems I call Changed. If you missed part one, She Beckons Me Come, and/or part two, Yearning Heart, you can read either or both of them now by clicking on their title. Part four, The Battle, will be posted October 16.
All four are being posted on Gooseberry Garden’s Poetry Picnic.
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Part Three:
In Dreams
My sleep is tormented and restless
I wake throughout the long night
In dreams I see you run
And I tremble at the sight
A whimpering whine escapes me
As I slip in and out of sleep
In dreams we run together
In night forest, dark and deep
I change sometime in the night
Wolf again becomes man
In dreams you change, as well
We run together hand-in-hand
On a bed of fallen leaves
I hold you close to me
In dreams a whisper “I cannot stay”
Before morning comes, you must leave
I shudder and turn, drift into sleep
‘neath a silent star-filled sky
In dreams my wounded heart weeps
If you go I will surely die
Morning comes, I awake with a start
My body is wet with the dew
Closing my eyes, I beg sleep return
For in dreams, I am ever with you
Copyright © C. Mashburn
Sherry Mashburn said
powerfully romantic!!!
charlesmashburn said
I think so!
siggiofmaine said
Thank you, I enjoyed this very much.
☮ Siggi in Downeast Maine
charlesmashburn said
Thank you for the comment!
David (1MereMortal) said
Very romantic write…I especially liked:
“On a bed of fallen leaves
I hold you close to me
In dreams a whisper “I cannot stay”
Before morning comes, you must leave”
An excellent poem
charlesmashburn said
Thanks for the awesome comments, David. As always, very much appreciated!
Becky said
Good stuff Charles. 🙂
So sorry it took so long for me to visit, I’ve been ill. But looking forward to reading the others in this series.
charlesmashburn said
I hope you’re feeling better!
Thanks for the visit and comment!
kshawnedgar said
Heartbreaking and yet, I feel hope.
charlesmashburn said
Thanks for the visit and comment!
terri0729 said
Another great installment Charlie! Gives me the shivers every time I read one of these!! I love it, lol. Peace and love, Terri
charlesmashburn said
Thanks, Terri! I appreciate your visits and comments very much!
manicddaily said
Yes, very romantic! It reminds me of a romantic song, gone to the wolf!
charlesmashburn said
Thank you for the great comments!
Daydreamertoo said
Aww I do hope it has a happy ending!
Very romantic and passionate too.
charlesmashburn said
Next Sunday night: the final chapter, The Battle.
Thanks for the comments!
Jamie said
You’ve kept the story going well, avoiding any repetition from parts 1 and 2. This has a slower pace to it, more reflective.
charlesmashburn said
Thanks for the thought-filled comments, Jamie!
Next Sunday night: the final chapter, The Battle.
Andy said
Hello Charles.
This is so heartbreaking. Not being able to be together completely except in dreams. Looking forward to “The Battle”.
So vivid & so beautifully penned, my friend.
Thanks for sharing & for your most gracious comments. I appreciate your visits immensely.
Woman As My Friend And Lover
charlesmashburn said
Thank you for the wonderful comments, Andy. They are always very much appreciated!
robin said
wow, great story… 😉
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Robin. I’m glad you’re enjoying it.
Final chapter, The Battle, next Sunday evening!
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Robin!
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Robin!
Final chapter, The Battle, next Sunday evening!
Classic NYer said
This is so beautiful and so sweet…
charlesmashburn said
Thank you! I appreciate the nice comments!
Sarah Johnston said
yes dreams always seem so real and when we dream we are where we want to be and with the person we want to be with well penned
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/10/the-bird-of-love/
charlesmashburn said
Thank you for the thoughtful comments!
Madeleine Begun Kane said
That’s really beautiful!
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Madeleine! I appreciate the visit and comment!
The Cello Strings said
fabulous flow.
dynamic imagery.
Thanks for sharing.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you for the wonderful comments!
ahhhpoetry said
Morning comes, I awake with a start
My body is wet with the dew
Closing my eyes, I beg sleep return
For in dreams, I am ever with you
Isn’t this always the way? Once we wake up, we lose our dreams and no matter how much we want, they aren’t easy to regain.
Softly romantic…..sigh….
charlesmashburn said
Yes! So many times we awake from wonderful dreams, and try as we might, we can never go back to them.
Thanks for the great comments!
Sherrie Theriault said
This is so beautiful it tears at my heart and tears fall down my face, that familiar sick sweet pain of loss. Thank you for sharing your writing with me, I enjoy is so much. Also I so appreciate your kind words about my work, I want to compile them and use them to convince an agent to represent me!
charlesmashburn said
As for your work, Sherrie, I am of the opinion that you have the talent and material to get published. I wish you well in that regard.
And, I also thank you for the wonderful comments on this poem. I am so glad you enjoy my writing!
June_Butterfly said
Sad and totally romantic!Triggered the romantic in me.Beautiful piece!Thank you so much for dropping by my place,too.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you!
morning said
morning comes, you must leave,
changes and wolf, wow.
you create a vivid picture here.
charlesmashburn said
Thanks for the commentss, Morning!
Parth Joshi said
love the metaphors on wolves that you often use…
charlesmashburn said
I’m glad you enjoy it, Parth. Thanks for the visit and comment!
Dennis Go said
Fascinating and romantic piece!
charlesmashburn said
Thanks, Dennis! I appreciate the comment!
dandylion28 said
This is very romantic, love it!
charlesmashburn said
Thank you very much!
Sheelonee said
this is a dream journey where the inner world and outer world coalesce into one, come apart, again come together .I Like. 🙂
charlesmashburn said
Thanks for the great comments!
Larry Meredith said
A very haunted dream, haunted by a melancholy of loss, haunted by wishes that can’t be, and also a hint of nightmare, the haunt of the supernatural, the haunt of how we may feel within our soul about the warring parts of ourself between control and loss control.
Larry
charlesmashburn said
Thanks for the insightful and thought-filled comments, Larry!
becca givens said
I am loving this series … this one is powerful and passionate ~~ looking forward to the next chapter … what will happen? Heartstrings pulled ~~ 🙂
charlesmashburn said
Glad you are enjoying it, Becca! Thanksfor the great comments!
Ankoku Hikaru said
You, and your words…. Always well written, Keep it up and never stop.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you very much! I appreciate the kind comments!
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Seabell said
The best I read from you… 🙂
charlesmashburn said
Thank you very much! I appreciate the great comment!
elizena said
My tear ducts are over active again today Charles. This was sad and I wanted to close his eyes and find his love again, even if only in sleep. Awesome! Blessings.
charlesmashburn said
Yes, I’m afraid you will find the next two segment quite sad, as well.
Thank you for reading and commenting!
lscotthoughts said
Another romantic beauty with more to be said…I’m enjoying this series!
charlesmashburn said
I appreciate you taking the time to read it!