Here’s the deal; I’ve been on a roll today—wrote three poems—and the words don’t seem to want to stop. I’m in a zone, and you have to run with it when it’s there. This one also inspired by Catherine Ryan Hyde’s, Funerals For Horses. If you haven’t seen my first one inspired by this novel, take a look at it – Pure Madness.
Summer Leaves
It’s like someone bending over backward
Being nice to you so you’ll like them
When you already like them anyway
To save them the trouble
And it’s like they know
And you know they know
And they know you know they know
But the game still needs to go on
Because there’s no point arguing
With someone who’s being nice to you
Or like when you’re tapping your foot
A nervous habit
You swear you don’t have
And you stop doing it for a moment
So they’ll see it doesn’t mean anything
Then you stare out the window
Like there’s something out there
That does matter
And without looking at them, you say
We won’t always be together, you know
And just like that… summer turns to fall
Copyright © C Mashburn
I seldom post more than one story or poem a day, but I wrote this one earlier this morning, and Kellie Elmore’s Free Write Friday hit it right on the head, so there ya go.
Sherry Mashburn said
ooh . . .
charlesmashburn said
That’s what I was thinkin!
Heidi Barnes said
Or winter…depending on the situation. 🙂 I think it’s something in the air because I’ve done a blog, FWF and my mind is turning with A&D. Or it could be the fact I’ve only had coffee and m&m’s this today. 😉 Keep the roll going.
charlesmashburn said
Coffee and m&m’s… the breakfast of champions!
Heidi Barnes said
Yep, right up until the crash and burn. :S LOL
charlesmashburn said
🙂
xxkultuur said
A great analogy for the seasons of our lives…
charlesmashburn said
I think you’re right, Maria. Thanks for stopping by!
Amy Jo Sprague said
wow Charles this is fantastic. I absolutely loved it. The images of those tendencies, the peculiar things we do, and then looking out there “for something that DOES matter” and the end a pleasant, pleasant surprise. A pleasure to read. I’m a fan.
charlesmashburn said
Oh! I love fans! Thank you, Amy!
buildingalifeofhope said
Summer is like a fleeting romance, isn’t it?
charlesmashburn said
I do believe it is. Thank you!
Kellie Elmore said
Love how you personified the seasons and made them speak! Lovely piece as always, Charles. So happy to hear you are on a roll. I love when that happens, although my muse is off somewhere lollygaggin without me today…well, for a few days now. lol
charlesmashburn said
Maybe you’re off lollygagging without it… 🙂
Thanks, Kellie!
Mark said
Great write Charles, keep rolling it is a good thing! Loved the lines > ‘Like there’s something out there~That does matter’ It made me pause cause I so believe that in my life even when I do not know what it is. Wishing you a great summer!
charlesmashburn said
I believe that too, Mark! Thanks!
Annie's Muse said
Perfection Charles — hit me in the gut it did! Especially this:
And without looking at them, you say
We won’t always be together, you know
And just like that… summer turns to fall
I really needed your words today — thank you!
charlesmashburn said
I’m glad you like it, Annie!
Stephanie said
I feel like I was in denial reading this one. A good thing…evocative and simple. Really great Charles!!
charlesmashburn said
Thank you very much, Stephanie!
mindlovemisery said
Oh wow Charles this is amazing, the attention to details, the body language you have really captured it. Your work has an amazing charm as well
charlesmashburn said
Thank you! I think you’ll like the new one too. Almost done with it!
Old Grizz said
simple…flowing…like a summer’s meandering stream that makes you feel good because it is.
charlesmashburn said
Thanks, Griz!
Susie Clevenger (@wingsobutterfly) said
Just when the romance is at its steamiest goodbye knocks on the door. Love it!
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Susie!
LaTonya said
Perfect title. Enjoyed.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you!