Going to visit an different poetry site today. I’ve been noticing dVerse Poets on some of the blogs I visit, and decided I’d shoot one of my favorite poems their way and see what they think of it. This is one of the few poems I’ve written that don’t rhyme. I’m old fashioned (stubborn) that way. I like the melodic tone of words that blend and mingle at the end of each line. But, this one ain’t too bad. I hope you enjoy it.
The Sun Came Up Again
The sun came up again
Across the street
In the neighbor’s yard
Through early budding tree limbs
–
The sky glowed fiery red
Then golden
Then dazzling white
As another day began
–
A slash of light
Fell ‘cross my arms as I wrote
The thought crossed my mind
That I’d said too much
Heard too much
And it had changed things
–
I wondered
If they had changed for the better
I hoped so
–
I’ve changed things before
By being too open
Too honest
–
I’ve watched the sun come up
Regretting words I’d spoken
The day before
You would think I’d learn
–
I have learned
–
I’ve learned
That the sun will come up
Sometimes you will see it
And feel it
Sometimes you won’t
But it’s there
–
Love is like that
At times you can bask in its warmth
And feel its arms wrapped around you
A flash of it will lay across your heart
–
Then at other times
It falls silent
And cool
It’s still there
Just not as obvious
–
You have to know it’s there
Never doubt it
Never turn away
Just know that behind the cloud
Behind the mountain
Behind whatever has made the warm glow fade
It is there
–
You have to let it be there
You have to want it to be there
It can’t always be glorious
It can’t always be spring
–
Copyright © 1998 C. Mashburn
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Daydreamertoo said
No, love has to bloom, it has to be trusted and it has to be equal. We all have to learn how to love, especially if we’ve been hurt and have trouble trusting it again.
This is lovely.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Daydreamertoo! I agree!
I appreciate the visit and comment!
claudia said
hey charles..nice to meet you and welcome at dVerse.. i’m a big sunrise lover and so good to know that the sun is there, no matter if we feel or not…beautiful verse you brought to the table..thank you..
charlesmashburn said
Thanks, Claudia! I appreciate the kind words and the welcome!
Laurie Kolp said
This is beautiful, Charles. Love sustains mountains and thunderclouds, words said or not, it stays. Each new day is a fresh start.
charlesmashburn said
Yes! I agree that each day is a new day and a new start!
Thanks for the visit and comment!
ayala said
Beautiful and wise…. It can’t always be spring.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you! I appreciate the visit and comment!
Pat Hatt said
Yeah it can’t be forced when it isn’t there, even if the neighbor tries to rub it in..haha..great verse.
charlesmashburn said
Thanks, Pat. You know my neighbor?? Ha!
Thanks for the visit and comment!
Grace said
“You have to want it to be there” – Love is a decision, so this line captures it very well.
Nice to see you at D’verse.
(aka Heaven)
charlesmashburn said
Thanks, Grace/Heaven! I’m glad to be here!
hedgewitch said
Couldn’t agree with you more–some things are most present when they’re hidden to our eyes, and some things do indeed never go away. Glad to see you at dVerse.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you for visit and comment. Pleased to be a part of the festivities!
brian miller said
sometimes you will see it and others you wont but it is always there…like love…yes….there is great truth in that…very nice progression in this…
charlesmashburn said
Thank you very much, Brian!
Your visit and comment are appreciated!
wordsandthoughtspjs said
I am counting on spring year round 🙂 Lovely poem and thanks for the very nice comment on mine.
Pamela
charlesmashburn said
Thank you very much, Pamela; and you are welcome!
Sherry Mashburn said
I love the thought behind this poem. So true.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, m’dear!
ManicDdaily said
Your poem is certainly true. It can’t always be spring==but then spring is not necessarily one’s favorite season. (Lots of life, but lots of bugs too!)
I’m joking here, but, of course, you bring a very broad perspective here. K.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you! I like bugs!
myrna! said
Charles, I can’t tell you how much I needed to read these words. Thank you.
charlesmashburn said
That’s wonderful! I’m glad they were a help to you, Myrna!
Kellie Elmore said
…and life does go on. no matter what we do or don’t or regret… nice, poignant piece 🙂
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Kellie! Exciting news about your book. I know the feeling!
ladynyo said
This can be applied universally, Charles. I like this very much, and when we find the commonality in things, we complete that web of humanity….
Thank you, Charles, for your words tonight. They lift the Spirit.
Lady Nyo
charlesmashburn said
I hope I didn’t over step and “say too much”.
I appreciate your visit and wonderful comments!
zongrik said
it can’t always be spring is really deep
charlesmashburn said
Thanks, Zongrik. Your visit and comment is appreciated!
Emma said
Hey Charles, this is a great exploration for me. There is such wisdom in those final two lines…truly we can’t always be enmeshed in the warmth and promise of spring. Very nice.
charlesmashburn said
I’m glad you like it, Emma!
Thank you for stopping by my blog, and thanks for the nice comment!
Ginny Brannan said
“You have to let it be there
You have to want it to be there
It can’t always be glorious
It can’t always be spring”
Not always Spring, but as long as it is there is all that matters. Well captured!
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Ginny!
I appreciate the visit and comment!
wolfsrosebud said
wonderful depth to this piece… just sitting in the sun
charlesmashburn said
Thank you. It’s an older one, but one of my favorites. I still remember the morning I wrote it, and the scene is exactly as I portray it; the thoughts, too.
Thanks for the visit and wonderful comment!
Jody said
Thank you for sharing with me!!
charlesmashburn said
You are very welcome, and thank you for the visit and comment!
ladynimue said
Beautiful this one !
Am going through a similar time of doubts.. and this poem cheered me a bit 🙂
thanks !
charlesmashburn said
It blesses me to know I’ve helped cheer you!
Thank you for stopping by and leaving the nice comment!
Sherrie Theriault said
You my friend are always glorious!! Thank you for sharing your wonderful work and making your kind remarks on mine!
charlesmashburn said
Aw! Stop it, Sherrie! Glorious? Me? You get the first “made-my-day” button for this glorious comment!
Kerry O'Connor said
I like the idea of the sun coming up in someone else’s yard and all the ideas which ensue from that beginning.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you! I aprreciate the visit and comment!
kez said
such true words written so splendidly thank you x x x
charlesmashburn said
Thanks, Kez! I appreciate the splendid comment!
Sheila Moore said
what a great comparison! the sun and love – your words ring so true for me. welcome to the pub!
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Sheila! Glad to be a guest in the ol pub!
thursdaychild1973 said
Great piece, thanks Charles! Words I needed to hear right now too. I’ve come across your work before, and very happy to be revisiting it!
charlesmashburn said
I’m so glad the poem could be a help to you!
Glad you dropped by again, too!
I appreciate the visit and great comment!
Shen Hart said
This has such a soft understanding to it, reflecting the images you put into it.
charlesmashburn said
That’s pretty much how it felt as I wrote it, Shen. Very easy and mellow morning.
Thanks for the visit and comment!
edpilolla said
killer last line. you built a rhythm for it very well.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you very much! I’m glad you like it!
I appreciate the visit and great comment!
Mary said
There are many facets of love. Your poem captured so many of them, and just beautifully.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you so much for the wonderful comment, Mary!
Joanne Elliott (@soulsprite) said
Many wise insights here. The last stanza is perfect!
charlesmashburn said
Thank you very much, Joanne! I appreciate the visit and comment!
kaykuala said
Charles,
Clever way of ‘uniting’ the 2 which may have different effects initially. The sun is always there but love may not. But you brought it out that both are always there. Is just that most are blind not to see love and lose out when they get distracted. Brilliant thinking!
Hank
P/S thanks for your visit
charlesmashburn said
Thanks, Hank! That’s what I was thinkin!
Appreciate your visit and comment!
brenda w said
Oh but we want it to be! Excellent write, thank you for sharing it.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you for the wonderful comment!
Raivenne said
“It can’t always be glorious
It can’t always be spring”
Excellent words my friend. Interesting, our minds seem to be on similar paths. You post of love and I post of soul mates, yet both acknowledging that neither is white hot 100% of the time.
charlesmashburn said
White hot? You know how old I am, right? hahaha Kidding! And yes, you are right. the hot cools pretty quickly, but in my opinion, the hot isn’t love. Love comes after the hot, and it takes forgiveness, commitment, and most of all the attitude that the person you love is more important than you are.
birchpoet said
Great read! Didn’t miss the rhymes at all. 😉
I’m a Sunrise/sunset lover and this was lovely.
charlesmashburn said
I’m glad you like it, and I appreciate the great comment!
mpucukilalang said
again charles! your words enlightening me! the message over the words such a beautiful things to learn, a new point of view 🙂
charlesmashburn said
I’m glad you were enlightened by the poem.
Thank you for the visit and wonderful comment!
Mr Blaque said
Very open, certain things in life are like the sun always raising and setting. Love is one of those up and downers, beautiful imagery
charlesmashburn said
Thank you for the visit and nice comment!
Kathe W. said
this is lovely- a delightful and thoughtful piece
charlesmashburn said
Thank you very much, Kathy! I appreciate the wonderful comment!
Paula Tohline Calhoun said
“Every morning’s sun follows every evening’s night, and every day I know that it will come.” Even when we can’t see it or feel it, it is there. True and lovely thoughts, Charles. Thanks for sharing!
charlesmashburn said
Thank you for the visti and comment, Paula!
Susie Clevenger said
I have been married for 41 years and there have been times love fell behind the clouds…The morning didn’t shine as bright. But the constant of love remained to meet another morning with its glory of sunrise. A beautiful poem Charles that speaks of the reality of love.
charlesmashburn said
I applaud your 41 years, Susie! Well done!
Thank you for the wonderful comment!
Catie Eliza said
Susie… people like you, marriages like yours are what stops me from giving in to the armour of cynicism. :] Thanks :] xx
charlesmashburn said
I agree! These lasting marriages are an inspiration to all!
Catie Eliza said
Did you post this one before? It feels very familiar, but I love it. It is absolutely true and, just as another piece you wrote before provoked me, this one soothes me and inspires hope. :] Love eternal, undying, even in a mist or behind an obstacle, it’s there. That’s the best love. :] xx
charlesmashburn said
I have posted this before–several times–but it is one I will repost over and over again, not only because new readers are constantly viewing my posts, but because I think it carries a message of hope. I’m glad it soothes and inspires you, Catie. Those are good things!
I’m glad, too, that you’re visiting my blog again. I missed you!
Chevrefeuille said
I loved reading this. Thanks for visiting my haiku-blog about Basho.
charlesmashburn said
I’ve visited your blog several times in the past, but was not able to leave a comment. I was finally able to leave one this trip! I enjoy your Haiku blog!
Thank you for stopping by here and leaving the nice comment!
Snowflakes said
enjoyed it,
you never fail to impress.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Kitty!
I’m glad you enjoyed it!
danroberson said
That sun causes more trouble,
Because folks can’t agree,
Whether sun up or sun down,
Is best to see.
Charles, your poem was magnificent.
Love is like Mr. Sun,
Can’t please everyone,
once it’s begun,
and doesn’t please anyone,
once it’s done.
charlesmashburn said
Thanks for the poetic response, Dan. Glad you enjoyed my poem!
pure2core said
I can say i am the admirer of your message oriented poems.. simple and valuable..Thanks for share Sir..Happy to have read this one..
charlesmashburn said
Thank YOU for the awesome comment! Very much appreciated!
Christine said
I love this poem; breathtaking in its imagery and message. I like the parallel you drew between the sunlight and love. Superb.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you for the wonderful comment, Christine!
James Rainsford said
Powerfully authentic and perceptive. Ultimately full of hope and optimism.
I loved it.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you for the awesome comment, James! I appreciate your kind words very much!
Classic NYer said
I really like this poem… and somehow it feels like a rhyme even though it doesn’t rhyme. Did that make sense?
charlesmashburn said
I think that’s my style. Most of the non-rhyming stuff I write seems to have a cadence to it that makes it feel the same as the ones that rhyme. Does that make sense???
Thanks for the visit and great comment!
ANSHUL GAUTAM said
Amazing poetry…Each stanza, was an enjoyable bonanza 🙂
I got to know about you from The Poetic Palace.
!Hugs!
ANSHUL
http://anshul-gautam.blogspot.com/2012/01/butterfly.html
charlesmashburn said
Thank very much for the wonderful comment! I’m glad you enjoyed my poem!
thoughtsnotlost said
You moved me so much with this one, I think the tears began to well by the time I got to this wonderful liine:
“A flash of it will lay across your heart”
Great read and oh so true!
charlesmashburn said
Wow! Thank you for the awesome comment. It is rewarding when someone is moved by something I’ve written!
Die Reise meines Leben said
I loved the way the poem emphasizes – the strong silent presence of the sun – illustrating ever-lasting love. We always thought love should be passionate burning and raging. Not true. It’s always the slow silent burning – we feel it there, we know it’s there, not just physically not just words, we feel it with our heart. Hence even when it’s not obvious, we are confident yet of its presence 🙂
Wonderful lasting!
charlesmashburn said
Thank you very much for this awesome comment! It is greatly appreciated!
dsnake1 said
beautiful words, charles. 🙂
yes,“Never doubt it, Never turn away”. i am moved by these lines.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you so much. Your wonderful comment blesses me!
Andy said
Hello Charles.
Like everything else, love needs to be nurtured & cherished in order for it to bloom, to grow. For me who exists in the image of love, I’m all for never doubting it & never turning away from it, but giving it your whole heart & getting lost in it.
Beautiful expressions.
Thanks for sharing.
Harp Of My Soul
charlesmashburn said
I agree, Andy. Doubt is a seed that can grow weeds in the garden of love and once they begin to grow untended they can take over and choke out the beutiful flower that is love. On the other hand, if you never turn away from love and give it your constant attention, it will continue to flourish and remain beautiful.
Thank you for dropping by and blessing me with this wonderful comment!
poetryroad said
This poem reminded me of the Moon Flower and its ability to open and close. I like how you let us peek into your feelings then covered them up, then exposed them again throughout the stanza’s keeping us reading to the end.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you very much! I’m glad you enjoyed the poem!
I enjoyed your nice comments about it!
A.B. Thomas said
It was a marvel the first time I read this piece and it still has that fantastic voice within it once more!
charlesmashburn said
Thanks, A.B.! I appreciate the kind words!
SiNA said
yup so true…things are there but only we don’t see them…that’s very bitter and also comforting at the same time…
charlesmashburn said
Thak you, Sina. So glad you like it!
becca givens said
we start afresh each day with a clean slate … trusting faith, hope and love with be steady companions as we progress on the daily journey of life … striving to do better this day than the day before.
well done ~~
charlesmashburn said
I absolutely agree, Becca!
Thanks for the wonderful comment!
Chevrefeuille said
Well done. Loved reading this poem. Thanks for sharing it with the world
charlesmashburn said
I love to share, Kris!
Thanks for the nice comment!
Tweety said
Oh this is so lovely…. Each word here gives hope…Love is there for all of us.. 🙂 Thank you for such a lovely creation 🙂
charlesmashburn said
Thank you for the awesome comment!
I’m glad you see hope in this poem! It’s very much what I hoped to portray.
Madeleine Begun Kane said
Beautifully done!
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Madeleine!
mbwilliams said
Very wise words Charles, these ones at least, will do only good released out into the world
charlesmashburn said
Thanks, mb! I appreciate your comment very much!
Jannie Funster said
I think being too honest and open is a blessing! Good for you. You sound like a very caring soul — one who keeps the weeds of doubt out of your garden.
And love the “Slash” of light that was on your arm. Poetry rocksQ
Hope you are well today.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you very much, Jannie!
This is one of my most favorite poems. I remember the morning vividly, and it all came to me and happened just as I describe it.
Thanks for stopping by!