I’ve mentioned my fascination with wolves before; I’ve been intrigued by them since I was a child, and later in life the interest grew to include the mythological werewolf. In the late nineteen-nineties I stumbled upon the writings of Robert McCammon, and was immediately captivated by his talented representations of the sometimes man- sometimes wolf creature; he has a way of making them seem real and believable.
Changed
One: She Beckons Me Come
Alone, confused, and dazed
On my belly beside a stream
Water gurgles its way to the river
Rippling face stares back at me
Cupping my hands, I drink
The change begins to take place
Teeth grow large, face extends
Ancient heart begins to race
Bones crackle and muscles ripple
Smooth skin becomes hair covered hide
Gasping as pain overcomes me
I turn slowly and lay on my side
Sight dims, I swoon and faint
Then cower in a lair dark and deep
Mind dull and filled with nothing
I awake then and leap to my feet
Growling, I run with abandon
Wind rushing through gray-black fur
I crash through the stream then trees
Not knowing, but running to her
Her calls echo deep in the forest
Mournful, a sirens’ song sound
She beckons me come to her side
I stumble then roll ‘cross the ground
Whimpering, I struggle to rise
Bewildered, I cannot stand
Forefeet snap and burn
And quickly turn into hands
I groan, half human, half beast
Thrashing and fighting the change
In my mind, quick spiraling down
Once again, body roaring with pain
Awake now, in silent black forest
Lost, and naked, and cold
Glowing, eyes watch from a distance
Blink once… and then she is gone
Copyright © C. Mashburn 1999
See the rest of the series and other wolf poems by clicking here —> Changed ~ The series
Sharing this with mindlovemisery on her Prompt 11 – Literary Idols. She’s asked us to write something that was inspired by our favorite poet or author. I don’t have a favorite poet, but my favorite author is Robert McCammon, and he has been a great inspiration to me.
Sherry Mashburn said
Oh, that’s good! So many emotions here . . . fear, yearning, confusion. Awesome!
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, thank you, thank you!
PostMan said
You write with such raw emotion.
Brilliant pieces, over and over again.
Regards
The PostMan
http://postcardsinthewind.blogspot.com/
charlesmashburn said
Thanks for the great comments, Mr. PostMan! I’m glad you enjoy the things I write!
I hope you will come back over and over again! (The second part of this series will be posted just after 8:00 PM tonight.)
Morning said
Alone, confused, and dazed
On my belly beside a stream
Water gurgles its way to the river
Rippling face stares back at me
love it, your words constitute stunning imagery here, magical word flow.
charlesmashburn said
I’m so glad you enjoyed it, Morning!
Mr. Watson said
Amazing! Imagine if it were possible…! It was for the brief moment of reading this! I must say… U really know how to paint a picture ! Another great one !
charlesmashburn said
Thank you so much for the awesome comments and compliments!
Life: Between the lines said
a metamorphosis? I am not sure though sorry
happy gooseberry day!!!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/09/23/shifting-in-place/
charlesmashburn said
That’s okay. It is kind of far out there. Thanks for the visit!
Kay Salady said
This is wonderful, Charles. It left me wanting more. I want to know what became of her. ♥
charlesmashburn said
You’re in luck, Kay! This is the first of four, and you will find out what became of her. I will be posting one every Sunday evening.
Thanks for the great comments/compliments!
dhitzunako said
same here… i’m curious! it is great idea to post a story in poem series. i’ll be waiting for the next one. 🙂
dhitermination.wordpress.com
charlesmashburn said
I’ve tried the series with stories, and it seems my readers have no patience for such things. I think it may work better with the poem on this venue. I’m hoping so!
Thanks for the great comments!
terri0729 said
Ooooh, gave me chills! Another good one Charles. Peace and love, Terri
charlesmashburn said
OH-KAY! Love it when I give ’em chills!
Devilzangel said
oh i liked d way u described d transformation n back!!! nice one 😀
charlesmashburn said
Thanks! I’m glad you like it!
A.T Smith said
Thanks for your complimentary comment Charles. I enjoyed your poem very much, there is something about wolves isn’t there …
charlesmashburn said
You are very welcome, and thank you for visiting my blog and commenting on the poem. Yes, wolves are fascinating creatures!
cheri said
loved it—your words paint a vivid picture and deep feelings!!
charlesmashburn said
Thank you! You sure seem to be reading and commenting a lot lately. Sup wit dat? Missing me?
tigerbrite said
Very good. Will be watching out for the next instalment:)
charlesmashburn said
I think you will like this series!
Thankss for the commet!
manicddaily said
Oooh, vivid, mysterious, scary. I’m staying out of those woods!
charlesmashburn said
Good plan!
Thanks for the visit and comment!
thingy said
Ooh, wonderful write.
I love the marbles in the background, and I appreciate you stopping by my blog. Thanks. : )
charlesmashburn said
Thanks, Ms. Thingy! I appreciate your visit, as well!
Liliana Negoi said
i honestly wasn’t expecting such a flood of emotions…and the last stanza left such a sad taste in my mind…you did a marvelous job at filling your reader’s heart with feelings…beautiful!
charlesmashburn said
Thank you for the wonderful comments, Liliana! They are very much appreciated.
Please watch for the rest of the series!
Ina said
Wow that is quite a story, wonderful! 🙂
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Ina! I appreciate the visit and comment!
Adam said
A great poem. Quite sad in the fact that the change didn’t last long enough for him to see his love, unbearably sad if this happens every time.
With your fascination with wolves, can i recommend a poem to you which you may enjoy.
The poem is titled ‘Wolf’ by Billy Collins.
Thank you Charles for the fantastic comment that you left on my blog 🙂
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Adam. I’m glad you liked this and keep in mind, I describe it as a tragic love story.
I will look up the poem you suggest.
As for your first of thirty, I am seriously impressed. If it is typical, I like your style!
Irene said
You’ve captured the transformation wonderfully!
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Irene! I’m glad you like it!
Classic NYer said
This is gripping. I totally want to see where this goes…
charlesmashburn said
I think you will find it is a classic tragic love story.
Thanks for the visit and comment! Stay tuned!
Classic NYer said
I will. 🙂
charlesmashburn said
Okay!
Templeton's fury said
thanks for stopping by! i will b coming back 🙂
charlesmashburn said
You’re welcome, and good! Come by any time!
pandamoniumcat said
Eerie, and Ouch! I can hear those bones cracking… very visual as well. It should be an interesting series, I will look forward to the others. Well done 🙂
charlesmashburn said
Thanks for the great comments, Dianne! Much appreciated!
Christopher Raley said
Great poem, Charles. Thanks for stopping by.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Christopher, and you’re welcome.
robin said
i love the image of wolves too… “She beckons me come to her side
I stumble then roll ‘cross the ground” very well written…
charlesmashburn said
Thanks, Robin. Your visit and comments are appreciated!
Shawn Bird said
Ooooh. Evil stream!
Thanks for visiting http://shawnbird.com/2011/09/15/yesterday-i-wrote-a-love-song/ I appreciate you popping by to leave a comment!
charlesmashburn said
You are quite welcome, Shawn. And thank you for the visit and comments!
SiNA said
wow! so masterfully penned 🙂 amazing flow of music…
charlesmashburn said
Thank you for the wonderful comment!
swanrose said
I like how the first stanza could be the start of a normal story and it then it takes the turn. No pun intended 🙂
charlesmashburn said
But… this is a normal story! (isn’t it?)
Thanks for the great comment!
danroberson said
A wolf howling at the moon is one of the loneliest sounds around. All the emotion of the forest comes through. In your poem I could feel the emotions raging, the confusion, the agony and terror of being caught between two worlds. Great job!
charlesmashburn said
Awesome comments, Dan. Thank you!
David King said
You handled the transformations well.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you for your visit and comment
Heaven said
I enjoyed this.. nice retelling of finding love and losing it ~
charlesmashburn said
Thanks for the visit and comment!
lolamouse said
Eek! What a nightmare! Very intense and raw.
charlesmashburn said
Thanks, Lola!
Susie Clevenger said
Wow! Nice work…a potpourri of emotions…
charlesmashburn said
Love them “Wows”! Thanks, Susie!
The Noiseless Cuckooclock said
divine transformation piece, wolves are great inspirations on poetry, glad to see you focus on this .
charlesmashburn said
Thank you! I appreciate the visit and comments!
The Orange Tree said
life goes in circles, lovely retelling of a story on love and pains.
Thanks for the visit to my place.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you!
Seabell said
Wolves are perfect, beautiful creatures. I understand your fascination!
charlesmashburn said
I agree! Thanks for the visit and comment!
tekia said
Very nice! It has a haunting tone to it. Nice tale. I assume the “she” is the moon? I enjoyed the read.
charlesmashburn said
It’s interesting that you would see that, and I can actually see how you come to that thought, but the she is actually a female wolf/werewolf. Part two of the four part series will be posted next Sunday at approximately 8:00 PM.
Thanks for the read and comment!
Sharp Little Pencil said
Found you at MsL’s blog, and so glad you left this link! You are a wolf person, and if you love the “pure wolf” side of things, that is, the natural beauty and spirit of wolves, check out Sherry Blue Sky.
I found the werewolf in this poem immediately; caught between two worlds. Found amazing freedom in the section of pure wolf, running with abandon, and understanding the disappointment of being a changeling. This is very good work, Charles!
Amy Barlow Liberatore (“Sharp Little Pencil”)
http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/09/27/portrait-of-great-grandpa-and-mom/
charlesmashburn said
I’m glad to see you found me through my leaving a link. I started doing that a while back, and I think it has led to quite a few finding me when commenting on other blogs.
I will definitely check out Sherry Blue Sky. I don’t spend a lot of time on wolves, but they are a favorite of mine and I do love to write about them.
Be sure to watch for the three remaining parts of this series. I’ll be posting one each Sunday night the next three weeks on Gooseberry Garden.
Thanks for the visit, info, and comments!
Ankoku Hikaru said
Well Written with powerful words. The emotions within… Great Poem. Keep it Up.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you for the visit and comment!
Paula Tohline Calhoun said
Very nice, Charles! Sorry. For the shortage of comments from me lately. My “blogatical” has been. Ravenous for all of my former blogging time!
charlesmashburn said
No problem. I surely know how being away can take its toll! Thanks for stopping by!
David King said
Metamorphosis is something very deep in the human psyche. You have tapped into it very well.
charlesmashburn said
Thanks for the visit and comment, David!
emanita01 said
Awesome writing. Reading your poem was breathtaking!
For sending me here and, in means to thank you, please go to the link below. After reading your poem sending you there seems highly appropriate ;-D
charlesmashburn said
Thank you so much, Emanita! Your comments and suggesting my poem to others is a wonderful compliment!
edpilolla said
not knowing but running to her was like an accelerant here, like a wick hissing at full throttle. love-love the raging energy in this piece.
i also have been lit with creative energy for wolves lately. not a bad spell to be put upon, i find:)
charlesmashburn said
Wonderful comments! Thank you very much!
Kellie Elmore said
Charles, this is magnificent! You truly did a wonderful job with leading us through the transformation and the wild story of this…thing. A lonely man beast and the world he finds himself in. I was captivated. Thanks for sharing it with me! Bravo!
charlesmashburn said
Thanks, Kellie! But, there’s more! Don’t miss the three remaining poems in this series. I think you will enjoy them!
Miss Kitten said
Wow! This was a gripping piece. So full of emotion and pain.
Here’s my comparatively light-hearted piece, which is from a few months ago:
charlesmashburn said
Glad you liked it! Thanks for stopping by!
Kremo said
Amazing! Can really visualize it well !!!
charlesmashburn said
Thanks for the great comment!
clariice said
The images were vivid. I could feel raw emotions.
Looking forward to the next read!
charlesmashburn said
Wonderful! Sunday night! Don’t miss it!
Thanks for the wonderful comments, Clarice!
Fyodor Lewis said
Fantastic! The moments of transition between man and beast are exceptionally vivid and that last moment of loss and confusion is very powerful.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you! Your comments are awesome and much appreciated!
Sweet Pea said
i was all like
😮
and
O.o
not your (my) everyday read for sure.
but i liked it.
and thanks for your comment.
and for your visit =))
charlesmashburn said
You’re welcome, and thank you for stopping by!
Grå Sky said
Oh wow Charles, love the imagery. A story of infatuation impossible. Of transformation. Nice work 🙂
charlesmashburn said
Thank you! I appreciate the great comments!
Inside the Mind of Isadora said
Charles,
You never disappoint. Always outstanding and always an interesting read. The many comments say it all. Good one again ….
Blessings,
Isadora
http://insidethemindofisadora.wordpress.com/2011/09/29/lord-speak-to-me/
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Isadora! Your wonderful comments are very much appreciated!
Elyas Mulu Kiros said
Thanks for sharing your excellent poem! ENjoyed it! 🙂
charlesmashburn said
Thank you for the comment!
shanyns said
Very nicely done! Love how you put this together!
charlesmashburn said
Thank you! Your visit and comments are appreciated!
disjointedrhymings said
Beautiful, great images
charlesmashburn said
Thank you! I appreciate the nice comments!
mbwilliams said
The animal in all of us! Wolves have a mythical power linking us to our past and I think you capture that here. love it!
charlesmashburn said
Thanks, mb. I think you’re on to something. There’s always been a bit of the wolf in me, I think.
Appreciate the visit and comment!
robin said
touching words… i love your style.. i’ll be back…
charlesmashburn said
Oh! I love it when they say they will be back!
Thank you, Robin!
Andy said
Hello Charles.
I’m starting at the beginning of this series so I can follow along.
Awesome! Totally vivid. Had me gripped right from the beginning.
Also a little sad this half beast half human.
Excellent writing…now off to Part2.
Unchain My Heart
charlesmashburn said
Thanks for the wonderful comments, Andy. So glad you started at the beginning!
mairmusic said
Chilling, compelling.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, mm! Your visit and comment is appreciated!
becca givens said
OMG – I read this when you first posted, and thought I left a comment … but alas it must be in cyperspace …
I look forward to reading the entire series … I have a fascination with wolves as well … and believe the white wolf is one of my “spirit animals” … I had a wolf-hybrid … irridescent white with amber eyes … he thought he was a lap pup, even at 180 lbs, and would only lick a person to death! 🙂
charlesmashburn said
I’m glad you’re enjoying the series, Becca! Very interesting that you had a wolf pet. I cannot imagine that!
eclipseofthemoon said
…wow this is in my taste! Nice meeting you Charles, and many thanks for visiting my blog. On my way to read the next one………
Shadiatique said
After reading this poem so many times I must say. Your poem is so charming and very deep. Loved it and waiting for the next 3 poems.
Thanks for sharing.
charlesmashburn said
Thanks! Part two is available now!
johnewordslinger said
Cool, I like this, very detailed, and luring, 🙂 I have one also, called Rattling the Chains, 🙂 thank you so much…
charlesmashburn said
Thanks, John! I appreciate the great comments!
Emmanuel Ibok said
Wow! A creepy piece. I made the words so vivid. Well done.
Cheers!
charlesmashburn said
Thanks, Emmanuel! There’s three others in the series, if you’re interested: Two: Yearning Heart Three: In Dreams Four: The Battle
elizena said
This was really awesome, even though it scared me a bit, but it had me wanting more. I’m on my way to read the rest of this series. Awesome!!
Blessings!
http://elizena-lovingmycreator.blogspot.com/
charlesmashburn said
Thank you for the awesome comment, Elizena!
lscotthoughts said
Wonderful and compelling until the end!
charlesmashburn said
I’m glad you enjoyed it!
Polly Robinson said
Love it ~ puts me in mind of a book I read aeons ago, can’t recall who wrote it, but the same sympathetic tone …
charlesmashburn said
Thanks, Polly!
mindlovemisery said
Wow Charles this is spectacular so vivid I read this and it was like watching a movie, chilling indeed!
charlesmashburn said
Okay… how’d you get to it? I’m working on linking it to your prompt, but haven’t done so yet. ???