I posted a series of four poems this past October titled The Change, and when going through my poems this morning I found a forgotten fifth in the series. You can read the first four parts by clicking on the links at the bottom of this one, the tragic final chapter in the story of a being—sometimes man, sometimes wolf—and a love that could never be. Enjoy!
Death in the Spring
The wolf lies on the meadow
In cool spring shadow
Beneath the hill
Breathing faint
Eyes glazed
Too still
The valley stretches empty
Silence is all he hears
Then from a distance
A scream from the hawk
A faint movement
Curious twitching
Of ears
His eyes drift closed
As from deep within
Move the stirrings
Of one final change
A great tear from his eye
Then a soft whimpering
Past aged and yellowed fangs
As one last time
The wolf becomes man
There in the grass
All alone
His breathing is shallow
As hide becomes skin
‘mid a moving
Soft popping
Of bone
He drifts in and out
Edging t’ward final rest
He feels her presence
Above
On the hill
The last sound he hears
Her mournful song
Of goodbye
She lopes away then
And forever
He is still
Copyright © 1999 C. Mashburn
Part one – She Beckons Me Come
Part two – Yearning Heart
Part three – In Dreams
Part four – The Battle
Part five – Death in the Spring
Part five presented on Gooseberry Garden’s Poetry Picnic #22
Becky Sain said
I remember those poems!
This is a great addition Charles, no fair making us wait so long!
Wonderful my friend!
charlesmashburn said
Honest, Becky! I didn’t do it intentionally! I found this one yesterday, when I was looking for one to post on Gooseberry this afternoon.
I’m glad you enjoyed it!
cheri said
The Fitfh-the ending had an ending–i loved them so much-i posted them on FB:)i’m also going to use then to show Miranda-that poems come in all different styles..i LOVE your style:)
charlesmashburn said
I don’t remember seeing them on FB, but thanks!
You could show Miranda lots of different styles with just my poems!
Love YOUR style! hahaha
Grace said
there is a poignancy as well as acceptance of death in the end.. nice catchy title too ~
charlesmashburn said
Thank you for the nice comment, Grace!
leah J. Lynn said
This was a enjoyable read and unexpected
charlesmashburn said
Thank you very much, Leah! I’m glad you enjoyed it!
siggiofmaine said
Elegant and eloquent… I read all five just now…what a master of words and visions….thank you very much for sharing all five parts of this today.
Peace,
Siggi in Downeast Maine
charlesmashburn said
You are very welcome, Siggi, and thank you for reading all five!
I appreciate the awesome comment, too!
terri0729 said
oooo, a blast back to the past here and it was a great diversion too!! I loved this series you did. Nice addition Charlie! Blessings, Terri
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Terri! I’m glad you enjoyed the series!
Sherry Mashburn said
I love that line . . . soft popping of bone. I can hear it and feel it! Wonderful series.
charlesmashburn said
Feel it? Yikes!
Poetry & Icecream said
Eloquent and mesmerising to the end 🙂
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Norma!
I’m glad you enjoyed the poems!
~L said
…. this one pulled me in deep into the words! Such a great poem!
charlesmashburn said
Thank you! I appreciate the visit and comment, L!
Mihir Vatsa said
Like the play with structure, sir. Give it an interesting read and a balanced form.
Especially like the first and the last stanzas.
-M
charlesmashburn said
Thank you very much, Mihir!
I appreciate your visit and comment very much!
Die Reise meines Leben said
A little sad to start off spring. But I like the play of emotions and how he changes from wolf to man. Lovely imagery!
charlesmashburn said
Yes, a bit sad, but then life is ever changing and sadness is a part of it.
Thank you for the visit and comment!
Natalie Sunflowers said
magical word painting.
love it.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Natalie!
elizena said
This was an awesome series of poems Charles. I felt like I should have been reading a novel. Would have loved to read much more of this. I guess I’ll have to imagine the rest of it. LOL!
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Elizena! I’ve thought about turning this into a novel, and these days, with youngsters being so enamored with vampires, werewolves, etc., it might be a best seller! Something to consider doing in my spare time? Ha! I don’t have any spare time!
Thank you so much for reading and commenting on this series of poems, Elizena.
If you can, share them with your friends and families. Writing is my livelihood these days, and the more readers I have the more lively it will be. Currently it’s not very lively at all!! But, I do the best I can every day, and leave the outcome to God.
Bless you, my friend!
chimnese said
your words always catch me, it is so fluent that the story is so amazingly done…
charlesmashburn said
Thank you very much, Chim!
I appreciate your visit and wonderful comment!
Inside the Mind of Isadora said
Fascinating that this is the final one. I think you is foolin’ us, Charles.
But that’s okay – me likes them all.
Very Good again – as always.
Blessings,
Isadora
http://insidethemindofisadora.wordpress.com/2012/01/17/splatters/of/colors/and/hue/
charlesmashburn said
I wrote this series of poems in 1999, and this is indeed the final one. However, Another commenter wondered about this being a novel, and that strikes a chord with me. Maybe in the future. It would mean filling in a lot f the blanks that are the poetic part of the story, and I feel it is sometimes best to leave the details to the reader.
Thanks for the great comment, Isadora!
becca givens said
Somehow, I missed the 4th … and am glad you linked all of them with this one … so I could reread them. This is a great series, Charles. I am sad to see it come to an end as she:
She lopes away then
And forever
He is still
charlesmashburn said
Thank you for the wonderful comment, Becca!
Daydreamertoo said
Awww a sad ending. I always want a happy ending but, at least he is at peace. Lovely read.
charlesmashburn said
It can’t always be spring!
Thanks for the visit anc comment, Daydreamertoo!
claudia said
think spring is the saddest time to die…the wolf is a good metaphor…the sadness felt..the stillness at the end..
charlesmashburn said
I don’t know; as for humans, it’s maybe a good time to go. Funerals in cold weather or rain are the saddest.
Thanks for the visit and comment, Claudia!
markwindham said
very ‘still’ and ‘quiet’ tone. sad, well written.
charlesmashburn said
Thanks, Mark! I appreciate the visit and comment!
zongrik said
i like the peacefulness in this
charlesmashburn said
Thanks, Zongrik! I appreciate the nice comment!
brian miller said
i dunno that i have ever read a were wolf poem that made me feel this way…mournful for his loss….very well played charles…
charlesmashburn said
My take on werewolves and the way I portray them in my writing is much different than most writers. I see them and portray them as noble creatures who have soles and a deep capacity for love, but are trapped in a dual world where love is always beyond their grasp.
Thanks for the visit and comment, Brian!
Pat Hatt said
Must be winter, I blame the non happy ending on the crappy cold..haha…great piece.
charlesmashburn said
The piece wasn’t written in the winter, Pat, so that can’t be it!
Thanks for the visit and comment!
Zoe said
Oh this may be my favourite one of your poems so far. Your werewolf, so intensely portrayed, got under my skin. Awesome!
charlesmashburn said
Thank you for the wonderful comment, Zoe!
andiekins82 said
That was so visual! I was almost startled by the eagle’s scream 🙂 I felt like I was on the hill! Very well done. Thank you for sharing!
charlesmashburn said
Thank you for the awesome comment!
shail said
That brought a sense of strange sadness. Beautifully worded!
charlesmashburn said
Yes, the entire series was tinged with sadness and ended very sadly.
Thank you for the comment!
Steve King said
This was a wonderful piece. The poetic ‘moment’ extended throughout the whole…no letdowns or loose change. And a great windup.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you very much, Steve! I’m glad you enjoyed it, and I appreciate the great comment!
Shawna said
Love this, Charles: “mid a moving Soft popping Of bone” … I can hear it, and almost hear it. 🙂
http://rosemarymint.wordpress.com/2012/01/17/dearth-of-reason/
charlesmashburn said
Thank you very much, Shawna!
Your comments are always appreciated!
Taylor said
mind blowing imagery, well done.
🙂
charlesmashburn said
Thank you, Taylor! I appreciate your visit and comment!
mairmusic said
You paint an interesting scene here.
charlesmashburn said
Thank you fro the visit and kind comment, Mair!
pandamoniumcat said
Well…I read them all today and what an ending…you did leave the best to last! I enjoyed this series…dark and romantic til the end!
charlesmashburn said
Okay! Thanks, Diane! I appreciate you taking the time to read them all–you might be the only one to do that!
Polly Robinson said
What a story …
charlesmashburn said
Thanks!